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The line graph shows visitor proportions to various entertainment sites in Scotland from 1980 to 2010, highlighting that zoos and castles were the most popular attractions, while aquariums and festivals saw declines. Festivals, initially the most visited at 30% in 1980, dropped significantly over 30 years, while aquariums peaked at 35% in 1985 before declining. In contrast, zoo visits increased significantly, particularly in the last five years, and castles maintained their popularity, peaking at 45% in 1995 before experiencing a slight decline.

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The line graph shows visitor proportions to various entertainment sites in Scotland from 1980 to 2010, highlighting that zoos and castles were the most popular attractions, while aquariums and festivals saw declines. Festivals, initially the most visited at 30% in 1980, dropped significantly over 30 years, while aquariums peaked at 35% in 1985 before declining. In contrast, zoo visits increased significantly, particularly in the last five years, and castles maintained their popularity, peaking at 45% in 1995 before experiencing a slight decline.

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Jenny

The line graph illustrates the proportion of visitors in to several Scotland entertainment sites in
Scotland from 1980 to 2010. Overall, more people chose Zoo zoos and Castle castles to visit, while
downward trends were seen in the figures for aAquariums and fFestivals. Moreover, cCastles were
the most popular one compare to othersdestinations.

In 1980, the first ranked attraction was festivals were ranked the first with 30%. Then, there was a
gradual decreased by 40% in the percentage of fFestivals visitors in the next 30 years. In contrast,
the figure for aquariums peaked at 35% in 1985 and went down sharply to 20% again. In the ensuing
years, the proportion of visitors to aquariums hit the lowdropped continuously.

In contrast, there was a growing tendency to visit zZoos in the period of 30 years. Although, the
figure for Zoos hadpresented some fluctuations, a significant rise by 100% was seen in the last 5
years. Similarly, the percentage of people visiting cCastles soared from 24% to 45%, and reached the
a peak in 1995. However, there was a drop to 35%, followed by a very slow decline then slightly
decreased in 10 years. Nevertheless, within the given period, Finally, Ccastles was visited by
remained the most visitedpeople after 30 years.

Good work. There is a smooth transition of ideas. You have also properly selected the features to
present in the report.

Focus on using more concise language to reduce the word count to 160 at most.

185 words

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