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It is true that some people purchase things that they don’t need or worst purchasing things that are

not affordable, there are reasons for this like impulse purchases and long payment plans with
interest can seduce the purchaser to buy useless things. Regulations on Advertisements and
encouragement of minimalist lifestyle could encourage more people to buy less.
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It is true that some people argue for marriage before age of 30. while this might be suitable for
traditional Life-style, I believe this is an outdated idea for people to get married before age of 30 and
try to reach their professional goals.

It is undeniable that some experts believe that continues rise of population is the greatest problem
we humans face in present time. One of the reasons that some areas are having population
explosion is reduction of infant mortality and expansion of life compared to previous centuries.
while population is rising this is a temporary problem and compared to global warming and climate
change this is not the greatest problem we face.

It is true that growing number of students are studying abroad compared to past this has many
benefits to both host countries and students. while there are some drawbacks too, but overall
advantages outweigh the disadvantages
important grammar in writing ielts

1. Complex sentences

Examiners looking for :because ,although ,where as ,if …


eg. many people preferred online education because its more flexible
although technology improves communication it can reduce face to face interaction
while some people support this idea others strongly oppose this

Gov should invest in public transport because it reduces traffic congestion

[Link] clauses

For explaining more about a noun we use relative clauses :who ,which, that

Students who study abroad gain valuable experience.


technology which connects people can also isolate them

Gov should support industries that creates more jobs

Advanced form :students who study abroad often develop independence

3.‫ج شزطی‬

if +present +will
if gov invest in education the economy will grow

if+ past+ would


if public transport were cheaper more people would use it

passive voice

active
people use technology wildly
technology is wildly used new policies should be implemented

more schools should be built in rural areas


th problem can be solved through education

modal verbs should ,must,can,could may might


gov should invest in health care this policy could reduce unemployment
technology may improve productivity
students must develop critical thinking skills

[Link] grammar structures


not only but also
fagat be jaye how ever va there for use them

this policy not only reduces pollution but also improves public health

.6 the more the more

The more people exercise the healthier they become

[Link] and infinitives

Learning languages improves cognitive ability


using public transport reduces pollution

[Link] +verb

gov needs to improve education system


people should try to reduce waste

[Link] comparison
more ,less ,the most

Public transport is more envirmntaly friendly than cars


online education is less effective for practical subjects

this is the most effective solution

[Link] clauses for making it more complex

Many people believe that technology improves lives

it is clear that education plays the vital role

some pepole argue that gov should increase taxs

[Link] clauses best for high band


by investing in education gov can improve economical growth

Living in large cities people often face traffic congestion

[Link]

Not100or0
this may lead to serious problems
This can be considered as an effective solution
this is likely to improve the situation

[Link] tenses
present simple

many believe that technology is important

future
this trend will increase in the future

present perfect technology has change the way people communicate

ban 8 example
although, many people believe that online education is effective ,it cannot fully replace traditional
classrooms because students need face to face interactions to develop social skills.

Provide equal educational opportunities, bridge the achievement gap , foster critical thinking skills

Access to quality education-broaden student horizon , reduce carbon emission, environmental


degradation renewable energy sources ,mitigate the effects of climate change . privacy concerns

Sedentary life style –public health campaigns long-term health consequences -preventable illness
mental wellbeing – stimulate economic growth-job security and stability –workforce productivity –
invest in human capital- cultural reservation –social integration -widening generational gap- promote
social cohesion-shift in societal values

It is widely believed that governments should take more active roles in addressing this issue

There is growing evidence suggesting that this trend could lead to k=long term societal
consequences

While some people argue that this approach is effective others contend that it over looks several
critical factors

A number of measures could be implemented to mitigate the negative effects of this phenomena

This issue has sparked heated debates among policy makers and researchers a like

It is essential to consider both the potential benefits and possible draw backs before making a final
decision

The rise of this trend reflects a broader shift in societal values and priorities

This solution although promising may not be feasible in all context


It can be argued that investing in education yields the most sustainable long term out comes
altimetly a balanced approach is needed to insure that progress is achieved without compromising
esstial principalse

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