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The document outlines a strategy for writing effective emails to two different audiences: a manager and a client. It emphasizes the importance of clarity, brevity, and professionalism while providing a template for an email update regarding a project. Best practices include using short paragraphs, being action-oriented, and maintaining a professional tone.

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Emails

The document outlines a strategy for writing effective emails to two different audiences: a manager and a client. It emphasizes the importance of clarity, brevity, and professionalism while providing a template for an email update regarding a project. Best practices include using short paragraphs, being action-oriented, and maintaining a professional tone.

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1.

The Strategy: "Think Before You Write"


Before writing the email, you need to mentally (or on the worksheet) answer these for both
audiences:
Audience 1 (Alesandra/Manager): She likely wants brevity, status updates, and solutions. She
needs to know you have things under control.
Audience 2 (Elisabeth/Client): She likely wants reassurance, clear timelines, and professional
courtesy. She needs to feel valued.
2. Component #3: The Email Draft
Since I don't have the exact "Case Study" text, I will provide a template based on a common
engineering/business scenario (e.g., a project delay or a technical update). You can fill in the
bracketed info.
Date: May 6, 2026
To: Alesandra [Last Name]
Subject: [Project Name]: Update and Response to Client Inquiry
Hi Alesandra,
I am writing to update you regarding the recent request from Elisabeth regarding [Specific
Issue/Project].
After reviewing the requirements, I have determined that [State the situation clearly and
concisely]. My plan to address this involves [Step 1] and [Step 2], which should ensure we meet
the deadline of [Date].
I have already prepared a draft for Elisabeth that emphasizes our commitment to
[Quality/Safety/Timeline]. Please let me know if you would like to review the specific technical
details before I proceed further.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
[Your Title]
3. Best Practices to Follow
To get the best grade from your peers, ensure your final draft hits these marks:
Scannability: Use short paragraphs (like the one above).
Action-Oriented: Don't just state a problem; state a solution.
Professional Tone: Avoid "slang" or overly casual openings like "Hey." Use "Hi" or "Dear."
The "So What?" Factor: Make sure the very first paragraph tells Alesandra why you are emailing
her.

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