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Uh, I think this paper is Abdul Fa-- uh, Abdul, uh... I mean, you are Abdul F-Abdul Fatah Usman, I
think. Yeah. "Factor Affecting Individual Saving Habit, uh, the case of Harar Zone, Harar Maya
District." Uh, declaration is there. Declaration, um... Uh, table of content. Do you have the table
of content? Then, uh, look. If, uh, when we see, when we see the table of content, the table of
content, it is dependent variable, expected independent, then it is sociocultural. Uh, okay. Is
there, have you did, have you did really regression model? Uh, have you did regression model?
Even do tested, uh, model summary, correlation, multicollinearity, analysis of variance,
coefficient of test? Please don't lie. Okay? I know as you are lying. No need of lying. In the first
place, when we see your abstract, your abstract is not well written. It is 0% written, okay? So
under the, uh, the abstract, [notification sound] you need to include, you need to include, uh,
the general objective of the study, uh, methodology, research approach, research design, uh,
sampling method, sample size, s-data source, uh, method of collection, uh, even a method of
analysis, finding, a conclusion, recommendation. Sometimes implication have to be included
with a maximum word of 250. Please rewrite the abstract again. Don't send such abstract,
okay? Correct it. I have never seen such types of abstract. Background of the study. The
background of the study is too short. It's not enough. Expand and rewrite the background of the
study. The same, the statement of the problem is not enough. Show us the exist-- don't tell us,
okay? Show us the existence of the research problem, the existence of the gap by including
more than 50 research paper that are done related to your title. Then tell us what they did, who
did it, how they did it, what model they used, wha-how, what types of data they used, what
were their finding, what i- was the weakness and the strengths of their paper. Then you need to
identify the gap, okay? So that is my comment. Rewrite the statement of the problem again.
Objective. Uh, do you have, I think, research hypothesis? Uh, okay. Okay, there it is.
Significance of the study. Uh, write the signi-the significance of the study in paragraph. Don't
make as dot dot. This is not handout. It is research paper. The same scope, write it in
paragraph. Chapter number two, uh, I think it is the literature review. Some paragraph have no
any citation, any reference. You need to do it. Then it is what? I have, uh, there it is, conceptual
framework, independent variable. Okay, let me check it. Letter it. Expanded independent,
expanded discussion, social expanded discussion, expanded discussion. Okay. Uh, research
design, research approach. Okay. The target population. Look, the target population is what?
Six thousand four hundred and ninety individual in Harar Zone. Uh, three, you have categorized
government employee, micro. Okay. Primary data. Okay. Secondary data. Okay. Sampling
technique. Okay. Then it is okay. Uh, you, uh, you have already listed. They are here. Uh, let me
check it here. You stated two thousand three hundred and thirty-four. Two thousand three
hundred and thirty-four. Out of that one, it is two hundred and sixty-one respondents. Okay.
Then it is you have done proportional. Okay. Then data collection. Strongly agree, disagree. Uh,
uh, but, uh, you said Likert scale, but there it is what? You have even hypothesis. I'm not clear.
Really, don't lie. Have you used SPSS? What does mean SPSS by itself? I know. You copied from
somewhere, okay? Do your own. I'm not foolish as a child. Away. Even what, what, uh, there it
is what? What, what are the assumption of ordinary least square? Why you are li-lying here?
Sampling frame, regression model. Okay. Le-let's, uh, check explanation, social factor, result,
descriptive analysis. Uh, okay, age. So where is the model? But you have presented the model,
but where is the explanation of the model? Where is the description of the model? Where is the
analysis of the model? But you have a model. I'm not clear with this one. Okay? Where is the
OLS structure? Where is the output of SPSS? I'm looking only table. Where is the result of your,
uh, SPSS result? Where is the result of Excel? Where is the assumption of ordinary, uh, least
square? Then it is model summary. Uh, what the difference between why you analyzed in table
and, uh, here again in model Pearson correlation? Okay, don't lie in such a way. Uh,
multicollinearity. Then it is what? ANOVA. Hypothesis. Regression. Histogram. Linearity. Oh my
God. So correct all of the given comment and submit it again. Uh, don't joke. Don't lie. Put
yourself only. Don't copy from somewhere. That is my comment for you. Correct and submit it.
There is no chance for the second round comment. This is my first and the last comment for
you.