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The document outlines various strategies to achieve specific goals, such as improving student focus by banning smartphones, decreasing urban populations by creating jobs in rural areas, and enhancing healthcare access for seniors. It also discusses the pros and cons of social media and smartphones, highlighting their potential distractions and benefits. Additionally, it emphasizes the need for environmental protection and the implications of frequent travel and fast food consumption.
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Advanced Writing Structures

The document outlines various strategies to achieve specific goals, such as improving student focus by banning smartphones, decreasing urban populations by creating jobs in rural areas, and enhancing healthcare access for seniors. It also discusses the pros and cons of social media and smartphones, highlighting their potential distractions and benefits. Additionally, it emphasizes the need for environmental protection and the implications of frequent travel and fast food consumption.
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​📝 Structure 1: Để đạt mục tiêu A, cần làm điều gì​

​1.​ I​ n order to tackle the problem of lack of focus of students, schools should​
​not allow them to use smartphones.​
​ ackling the problem of lack of focus of students may require a ban on the use of​
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​smartphones at school.​
I​ mproving the attention span of students, which have been effectively shortened​
​recently, may require a widespread ban on the use of smartphones at school.​
​ ue to the ability of smartphones to instill a lot of mental stimuli at the same time,​
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​the attention span of students could only be improved once a complete ban on​
​smartphones is established at school.​
​2.​ I​ n order to decrease the population sizes of urban areas, we must create​
​more jobs in rural or remote areas.​
​ ecreasing the population sizes of urban areas could be accomplished effectively if​
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​more employment opportunities are made available for people in rural or remote​
​areas.​
​ reduction in urban areas’ population sizes could be achieved if more jobs are​
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​made available for people who live in rural or remote areas.​
​ iven cities attract a lot of people who migrate there for job opportunities, a​
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​reduction in their population sizes could only be accomplished once the job​
​markets in rural and remote areas become more dynamic.​
​3.​ I​ n order to improve the quality of healthcare for senior individuals,​
​accessibility to insurance must be enhanced.​
I​ mproving the quality of healthcare for senior individuals would necessitate an​
​enhancement in accessibility to insurance.​
​4.​ I​ n order to create a perfect world, we must have better healthcare and​
​improve accessibility to it.​
​ reating a perfect world would necessitate improvements in healthcare as well as​
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​accessibility to it.​
I​ mproving our world from its current state or perfecting it would require​
​prominent changes in our healthcare system and giving better accessibility to​
​ordinary individuals.​
​5.​ ​In order to create a perfect world, we must decrease the crime rate.​
​ reating a perfect version of our world would necessitate a reduction in the​
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​current crime rate.​
​ iven the destructiveness of high crime rates in the social welfare of human beings,​
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​perfecting our world would inevitably require a massive reduction in crime rate​
​around the world.​
​6.​ ​In order to alleviate traffic jams, we should ban motorbikes.​
​ lleviating traffic jams could be achieved if a ban on motorbikes is widely​
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​established and adopted.​
​ iven the massive number of motorbikes on our streets and how dangerous​
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​travelling on them could be, alleviating traffic jams and protecting travellers’ safety​
​could be concurrently achieved under a total restriction on the use of this​
​particular vehicle.​
​7.​ ​In order to control your weight, you must exercise.​
​→ Controlling a person’s weight would require regular exercises.​
​ Given the impact of physical exercises on burning excessive calories and​

​preventing weight gain, weight control​​inevitably​​requires enough time allocation​
​for these activities.​
​8.​ ​In order to protect the environment, we must ban plastic bottles.​
​ rotecting the environment could be achieved if a ban on plastic bottles is​
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​established.​
​ iven how persistent and enduring plastic bottles are, the protection of our​
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​environment could only be achieved under a total ban of these temporary​
​containers.​
​ lastic bottles, with the nature of being extremely resilient against any​
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​environmental damage, could exist for thousands of years, polluting the​
​environment and endangering many species. Given these detrimental​
​characteristics, the goal of protecting and preserving the environment could only​
​be achieved if a total ban on these temporary containers is established widely​
​around the world.​
​9.​ ​In order to reduce the rate of traffic accidents, cars must be banned.​
​ educing the rate of traffic accidents could be achieved if cars are banned around​
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​the world.​
​ iven the high accident rates caused by car users due to their high maximum​
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​speed, a reduction in accident rate could be achieved if these dangerous vehicles​
​are no longer used around the world.​
​ ars, while being used widely due to their convenience and high maximum speed,​
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​could simultaneously increase accident rates as collisions with them occur​
​frequently and often lead to devastating consequences. As a result, a complete ban​
​on these problematic vehicles should be established or else accident rates would​
​continue its increasing trajectory.​
​10.​​In order to help students focus better, smartphones should not be used at​
​school.​
​ elping students focus better could be achieved if smartphones are not allowed in​
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​school.​
[​ Antithesis-thesis]​​Given the ability of smartphones​​to​​instill​​mental distractions,​
​students’ attention span could only be lengthened if these distractive portable​
​devices are no longer used widely at school.​
​ martphones, while helping people access information around the world and​
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​connect with others effortlessly, could simultaneously be a highly distractive device​
​as they provide overloaded mental stimuli. As a result, enhancing students’​
​attention span could only be achieved if these devices of potential negative​
​implications could be banned completely.​

​📝 Structure 2: Pro & Con​


​1.​ A
​ lthough many medical breakthroughs have revolutionised healthcare,​
​many people still do not have access to them.​
​ edical breakthroughs, while transcending the landscape of healthcare for the​
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​better, still have restrictive boundaries that prevent people’s general accessibility to​
​them.​
​2.​ S
​ ocial media can distract people. However, it can still help us connect with​
​others.​
​ ocial media, while providing unprecedented comfort in communication, can​
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​simultaneously distract people by providing them with too much mental stimuli​
​from the external world.​
​3.​ S
​ ocial media can help us make more friends. However, they may make our​
​relationships more superficial.​
​ ocial media, while helping people increase the size of their social circles, may add​
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​a degree of superficiality to our relationships.​
​ iven the ability of social media platforms to help users communicate with anyone​
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​across the globe, they can definitely enlarge our social circles and increase the​
​number of relationships, yet a degree of superficiality may be added to our bonds as​
​our mental attention dilutes.​
​4.​ S
​ martphones can help us entertain effectively. However, they can lead to​
​lack of focus.​
​ martphones, while elevating entertainment experiences, could simultaneously​
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​lead to a decrease in our attention span.​
​ martphones, while assisting individuals in entertainment, could simultaneously​
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​disrupt our concentration. (Given that the ability of smartphones is to entertain​
​people, yet they could cause distraction.)​
​ iven the ability of smartphones to give access to a wealth of information online,​
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​they can be ideal devices to provide entertainment features, yet their attractiveness​
​could keep our attention on trivial matters, distracting us from important matters​
​in our lives.​
​5.​ S
​ martphones may help us have better entertainment. However, they can​
​lead to addiction.​
​ martphones, while helping us with novel entertainment features, can​
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​simultaneously lead to addiction.​
​ martphones, while helping us with novel entertainment features, can provide too​
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​many mental stimuli that keep users in an extensive hook, constituting the​
​manifestation of addiction.​
​6.​ D
​ oing physical exercises could help improve our fitness. However, it can​
​also lead to injuries.​
​ oing physical exercises, while helping improve our fitness, could lead to injuries​
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​once over-exertion occurs.​
​ iven that our physical capabilities are limited to an extent, doing physical​
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​exercises, while helping improve our fitness, can lead to injuries if over-exertion​
​occurs.​
​ hysical exercises, similarly to many other activities of human beings, are a​
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​double-sworded aspect as they can be beneficial yet posing some drawbacks under​
​specific conditions. With the physical constraints that every individual experiences,​
​pushing our bodies through intensive exercises could improve our endurance and​
​stamina. Nevertheless, once overexertion occurs and our body fails to sustain the​
​pressure, severe injuries could happen, which detrimentally interrupts our daily​
​lives.​
​7.​ S
​ ocial media, while helping us enlarge our social circles, can​
​simultaneously add a superficial quality to our bonds as our mental​
​capacity is further divided and diluted.​
​ ocial media, while having an enlargement effect on its users’ social circles, can​
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​simultaneously add a degree of superficiality to their bonds as their attention​
​assigned on each bond becomes further diluted.​
​ iven the ability of social media to grant universal access to almost every individual​
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​on a global scale, it has a massive enlargement effect on users’ social circles, yet​
​posing a risk of diluting their attention and making their bond superficial.​
​8.​ L
​ iving in apartments could help people save costs. However, they can have​
​problems with privacy.​
​ iving in apartments, while providing a type of affordable accommodation, could​
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​simultaneously put residents at a risk of compromised privacy.​
​ he sharing nature of apartments is behind its benefits as well as its drawbacks.​
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​These types of accommodation, while providing an affordable housing option for​
​many individuals, can simultaneously compromise people’s privacy.​
​9.​ S
​ ocial media can help people connect with each other. However, it can lead​
​to invasion of privacy.​
​ ocial media, while helping people connect with each other effortlessly, can​
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​simultaneously put users under the risk of having their personal data leaked and​
​used illegally.​
​ s social media connects people across the planet using their personal information,​
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​it can broaden our social circles, yet putting users’ highly private content under the​
​risk of being leaked.​
​10.​​Social media can help users have more friends. However, it can make our​
​relationships superficial.​
​ ocial media, while helping us expand our social circles, can add a superficial​
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​quality to many people’s relationships.​
​ ocial media, amidst their positive implications of our expanded social circles, may​
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​simultaneously dilute our mental capabilities, leading to superficial relationships​
​with even the closest individuals in people’s lives.​
​11.​ ​Eating sugary food could alleviate stress. However, it can lead to weight​
​gain.​
​ ating sugary food, while having a positive impact on stress alleviation, could​
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​simultaneously lead to weight gain.​
​ ugary food consumption, while temporarily alleviating our stress due to improved​
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​satisfaction, can simultaneously lead to many health concerns, including a high​
​potential for weight gain.​
​12.​​Smartphones cause distractions, so they must be banned.​
​ martphones, while helping students access the internet easily, could​
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​simultaneously cause distractions as students may use them during classes for their​
​private matters. As a result, banning them could be beneficial, helping students​
​concentrate more on learning.​
​13.​​Smartphones should be allowed because they help students learn better.​
​ iven the positive impacts of smartphones on the ability of students to gather more​
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​information for their lessons, schools should allow these useful devices, which can​
​eventually improve students’ learning outcomes.​
​ martphones, while providing access to information, can be a distractive tool if​
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​students use them incorrectly, and can simultaneously be beneficial if surfing on​
​the internet for extra knowledge is the primary goal. As a result, using them in​
​appropriate circumstances at school under the supervision of teachers could​
​maximise their potential.​
​14.​​As people exercise too little, they start gaining weight.​
​ iven how limited the frequency of exercising of modern individuals has become,​
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​the potential for weight gain has become more prominent.​
I​ t is of paramount importance that people must exercise regularly to avoid weight​
​gain, as these activities burn a lot of calories. Nevertheless, our lives have become​
​burdened with a lot of modern tasks and obligations, making it very hard to assign​
​enough time for physical exercises. As a result, people’s weight starts​
​uncontrollably increasing, eventually leading to obesity.​
​ odern work and study environments, while giving people more financial rewards​
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​and opportunities to progress, may simultaneously restrict the available time that​
​people have for physical exercises. Given how important these activities have on​
​weight control, a lack of them could directly cause the accumulation of excessive​
​calories, leading to weight gain and eventually obesity.​

​📝 Structure 3: Do A có tính chất sau nên A có cả lợi và hại​


​ .​ C
A ​ onditional inversion: Were ...​
​B.​ ​Modal auxiliary variations​
​ hile renewable energy sources might reduce carbon emissions, they must​
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​become more economically viable to replace traditional fossil fuels (Express degree​
​of certainly and possibility)​
​C.​ C ​ onditional structure for hypotheticals + whiz-reduction relative clauses​
​[a condition, leads to a direct consequence, lead to a broader implication]​
​D.​ ​Concessive clauses to address objections​

📝
​ Structure 4: A có nên được cho vào B hay không / A có những đặc​
​tính này sẽ giúp hoàn thiện mục tiêu B tốt hơn​
​ he aim of any school is to provide a comprehensive teaching of all necessary skills,​
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​including theoretical and practical ones. Although schools are highly skilled at​
​teaching theoretical knowledge, they lack an environment that can provide children​
​with real-life interactions. As working for communal projects requires a lot of​
​interactions with many people, children can develop pragmatic approaches to​
​issues in their lives, strengthening a major weakness that they may have at school.​
​📝 Structure 5: Nominalisation​
​1.​ W
​ hen space travel becomes too frequent, the environment could be​
​damaged. The reason is that space travel releases a lot of pollutants.​
​ requent space travel could damage the environment due to the release of a lot of​
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​pollutants.​
​ pace travel, with its massive release of pollutants and emissions, could jeopardise​
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​environmental protection.​
​2.​ W
​ hen people travel a lot, they can directly harm the environment. The​
​reason is that travelling discharges a lot of pollutants.​
​ ravelling a lot could directly harm the environment as this activity releases a lot of​
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​emissions and pollutants due to the function of our vehicles.​
​ ravel, in excessive fashion, could directly harm the environment from its​
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​unavoidable releases of pollutants and emissions.​
​3.​ W
​ hen people consume too much fast food, they may gain weight. The​
​reason is that fast food often contains a lot of calories.​
​ onsuming too much fast food could cause weight gain due to its nature of having​
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​high caloric contents.​
​ ast food, if excessively consumed, could lead to weight gain due to the​
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​accumulation of too many calories which are often found in this kind of food.​
​ ast food, universally produced to contain high caloric levels, could cause weight​
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​gain among excessive consumers.​
​ ast food, with its generally high level of caloric content, could cause weight gain if​
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​people consume it too frequently.​
​ requently consumption of fast food, with its usual high caloric content, could​
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​cause weight gain.​
​ he consumption of fast food, naturally having loaded caloric contents and​
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​excessive additives, could cause weight gain if moderation is not achieved.​
​4.​ W
​ hen there are too many cars on the street, the chance of traffic jams is​
​increased. The reason is that the sizes of cars are often large, and they​
​often do not use their maximum capacities.​
​ aving too many cars on the street could increase the chance of traffic jams due to​
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​their large sizes and the under-maximum-capacity usage of seats.​
​ ars, with their large sizes and the under-maximum-capacity usage of seats, can​
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​lead to traffic jams if too many of them are present on the street at the same time.​
​ he overreliance on cars, universally having larger sizes and transporting limited​
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​numbers of passengers, could cause traffic congestions.​
​5.​ W
​ hen the economy of a nation develops, it can help people invest more in​
​their public facilities. This development can help people improve their​
​living standards.​
​ he economic development of a nation can enhance investment in public facilities,​
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​directly improving people’s living standards.​
​6.​ ​My house was recently renovated. Now, my house is pretty.​
​The recent renovation is behind the beauty of my house.​
​ he aesthetically pleasing appearance of my residence comes from its recent​
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​renovation.​
​7.​ M
​ y house has just been renovated. Now, my house looks pretty. In the​
​future, my house’s garden is the only thing that needs to be fixed.​
​Due to the fact that my house has just been renovated, it looks pretty now.​
I​ t looks pretty → The current aesthetically pleasing appearance of my house comes​
​from its recent renovation. Nevertheless, the garden may be the only thing that​
​needs further changes in the future.​
​ espite the positive impacts of the recent renovation on my residence that leads to​
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​its aesthetically pleasing appearance, the garden should still be changed further in​
​the future.​
​ he beauty of my house thanks to its renovation still does not exclude the demand​
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​for making further changes to its garden.​
​8.​ T
​ he recent training was intensive. This training helps me understand my​
​business. I make good decisions afterwards.​
​ lthough the recent training was intensive, it helps me understand my business. As​
A
​a result, I can make good decisions now.​
​ lthough the recent training was intensive, it helps me understand my businesses,​
A
​leading to better-decision making afterwards.​
​ he intensity of this training, despite prompting challenges at first, gives me better​
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​insights into my businesses and is responsible for better-decision making​
​afterwards.​
​ he intensity of this training, challenging in nature at first, gives profound​
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​understanding of business operations, promoting better-decision making​
​afterwards.​
​9.​ S
​ ocial media helps me make more friends. However, social media also​
​advertises too much. As a result, I may not use social media this much in​
​the future.​
​ lthough social media helps expand my network of friends, it advertises too much.​
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​As a result, I may not use social media this much in the future.​
​ he benefit of giving me more friends on social media can not offset the discomfort​
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​of having to watch too many advertisements. Thus, I will not engage in social media​
​this much in the decision.​
​ ocial media platforms’ usual intensive advertisement campaigns can not​
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​compensate for their benefits of expanding my network of friends, leading to my​
​decision to curb using them in the future.​
​ he decision to limit personal uses of social media is the result of the fact that​
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​expanding my network of friends fails to compensate for intensive advertisements.​
​10.​​I called my friend in the middle of the night. She did not answer. However, I​
​heard something strange on the phone. I was so scared.​
​ he call I made for my friend was not answered yet a strange noise still came from​
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​it, chilling my bone out.​
​ uch a chilling story was when I made a phone call for my friend in the middle of​
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​the night. It was unanswered yet an insidious sound can still be heard from the​
​phone.​
​11.​ ​If we mandate charity, we may strip its intrinsic value.​
​ s charity is based on voluntary mindsets, if we mandate it, we may strip its​
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​intrinsic value.​
​ he essence of charity lies in its voluntary nature, and to mandate it, might be to​
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​strip its intrinsic value.​
​12.​​Doing voluntary work for the community should be forced. Or else, we may​
​lose its effectiveness.​
​ he essence of voluntary work for the community rests on its positive mindsets and​
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​the voluntary nature, and to add it as a compulsory part of school programs could​
​strip away its intrinsic value, leading to compromised effectiveness.​

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