Section 7.

1
●​ 1. Period Use: Use for declarative (statements) and imperative (commands)
sentences.
●​ 2. Comma Splice: Joining two independent clauses with only a comma. Example: I
like pizza, I like pasta.
●​ 3–7. P or Q: 3: Q, 4: P, 5: Q, 6: Q, 7: P.
●​ 8. Correcting:
○​ a. Change "?" to ".".
○​ b. Correct as is.
○​ c. Change period after "postponed" to a comma.
○​ d. Correct as is.
●​ 10. Difference: Direct questions ask something directly and use "?"; indirect
questions report a question and use ".".
●​ 11. Exclamation vs Question: Use exclamation points for strong emotion or emphasis
instead of just seeking an answer.

Section 7.2
●​ 1. Simple vs Compound: Simple has one independent clause; compound has two or
more joined by a conjunction.
●​ 2. Appositives: Use commas to set them off from the rest of the sentence.
●​ 3. Call an Editor!: Add commas after "Obviously," "staff," and "team." Change "Im" to
"I'm".
●​ 4. Correcting:
○​ a. Add commas after "Florida" and "Arizona".
○​ b. Remove commas around "that the city will be initiating a tax cut".
○​ c. Remove the comma after "report".
○​ d. Add commas around "one of the attorneys we met last year in Detroit".
●​ 6. Effective use: Writers use commas to separate items in a list, set off introductory
phrases, and clarify meaning.
●​ 7. Unsure?: If unsure, read the sentence aloud; if you naturally pause, a comma
might be needed, or check specific grammar rules for clarity.

Section 7.3
●​ 1. Semicolon preference: It's preferred when joining two closely related independent
clauses without a conjunction.
●​ 2. Dash: Use a dash to show a sudden break in thought or for emphasis.
●​ 3–6. Vocab: 3: virus, 4: modem, 5: laptop, 6: exports.
●​ 7. Correcting:
 ○​ a. Change comma after "accepted" to a semicolon.
○​ b. Change "possibilities" to "possibilities:" (colon).
○​ c. Correct as is.
●​ 9. Other Colons: Use them after salutations in business letters, between hours and
minutes, or to introduce long quotes.

Section 7.4
●​ 1. Fill in: a: commas, b: dashes, c: parentheses.
●​ 2. Apostrophe: Indicates possession or missing letters in a contraction.
●​ 3. Editor: Change "lunchons" to luncheons, "Valentines Day" to Valentine's Day,
"illnesses'" to illnesses, and "Wont" to Won't.
●​ 4. Correcting:
○​ a. ...degree (he graduated in '99), he began....
○​ b. ...market," said Lane Allen. "Consequently, we....
○​ c. ...replied, "A non sequitur is a 'statement that does not follow.'".
●​ 6. Quotes: Direct quotes use exact words in "" marks; indirect quotes paraphrase
without marks.
●​ 7. End marks: Periods and commas go inside ""; colons and semicolons go outside.

Section 7.5
●​ 3–6. Editing: 3: vice president, 4: How to Become a Millionaire, 5: Larry Hinkle,
Danville, 6: Washington, D.C., White House.
●​ 7. Correcting:
○​ a. Lowercase southwest and state.
○​ b. Lowercase vice president.
○​ c. Title: Sailing in the Caribbean: A Vacationer's Paradise.
○​ d. Lowercase high school teacher, capitalize Italian.
●​ 9. Directions: Capitalize when they name a specific region; lowercase when they
indicate direction.

Section 7.6
●​ 1. Abbreviations: Use them when they are standard and won't confuse the reader.
●​ 2. Units of measure: Usually spelled out in text, but abbreviated in charts/technical
lists.
●​ 3–6. Spelling: 3: personnel, 4: consultant, memorandums, 5: sincerely, 6: erroneous.
●​ 7. Abbr. Correction: a: Mr. Parker, U.S., b: USDA, c: No., d: TWA, L.A., e:
government, November.
 ●​ 9. Abbr. vs Acronym: Abbreviation is a shortened word; acronym is formed from initial
letters and spoken as a word.
●​ 10. Capitalized?: Most should be (like NASA), but some aren't (like etc.).

Section 7.7
●​ 1. Accuracy: It prevents costly mistakes and ensures professional clarity.
●​ 2. Ordinals: Numbers showing order (1st, 2nd); spell out if they are under ten.
●​ 3. Mail Call!: September 10, 2026; 15 Willow Drive; 2-year; 20,000-mile; $200.00.
●​ 4. Correcting: a: 3,500, b: five, third, c: Correct.
●​ 6. Spelled out: Usually for numbers one through ten or numbers starting a sentence.
●​ 7. Numerals: These are used for precision and quick reading of technical data.

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sections you uploaded.

Section 8.1: Word Choice

●​ 1. Denotation vs. Connotation: Denotation is the literal, dictionary definition of a word.
Connotation is the emotional feeling or social meaning the word carries.
●​ 2. Thesaurus vs. Dictionary: A dictionary tells you what a word means; a thesaurus
gives you synonyms (similar words) and antonyms (opposites).
●​ 3–7. Exact Words:
7.​ Delighted (instead of happy).
8.​ Complicated (instead of hard).
9.​ Consistent (instead of good).
10.​Unwise (instead of bad).
11.​Valuable (instead of good).
●​ 8. Correcting Incorrect Words:
○​ a. Averse (instead of adverse).
○​ b. Quite (instead of quiet).
○​ c. Complimented (instead of complemented).
○​ d. Exceed (instead of accede).

Section 8.2: Spelling & Vocabulary

●​ 1. Double Consonants: Double the final consonant if the word ends in a single vowel
+ consonant and the last syllable is stressed (e.g., refer becomes referring).
●​ 2. EI vs. IE: It’s "i before e except after c," or when sounded like "a" as in neighbor
and weigh.
●​ 3–6. Vocab Alert: 3: principal | 4: secede | 5: principle | 6: delinquent.
 ●​ 8. Correct Forms: a: flexibility | b: committed | c: advisory | d: advantageous | e:
scrapped.

Section 8.3: Thought Units & Pronouns

●​ 1. Thought Units: Keep related words together and avoid "misplaced modifiers" so
the reader knows exactly what you're talking about.
●​ 2. Antecedents: A pronoun needs a clear antecedent (the noun it replaces) so there
is no confusion about who "he" or "it" is.
●​ 3–6. Grammar Alert:
6.​ ...between you and me.
7.​ It was I who forgot....
8.​ Which one of the project managers....
9.​ Who is going to the safety meeting....
●​ 7. Rewriting Units:
○​ a. Courtney was at the bakery eating mini bagels with coffee.
○​ b. Technicians with little or no training can operate the new equipment.
○​ c. Brooke put the DVD, which everyone had been waiting to see, into the
player.
○​ d. The dentist was unable to complete the exam because the toddler's mother
was nervous.

Section 8.4: Business Writing Tone

●​ 1. You-attitude: It improves writing by focusing on the reader's needs and interests
rather than the writer's.
●​ 2. Passive Voice: Use it when you want to be tactful or when the person doing the
action isn't important (e.g., "The bill was paid").
●​ 3–6. Positive Language:
6.​ We are looking for candidates with specific experience that matches
our current needs.
7.​ Please let us know about your cruise experience.
8.​ Financial advisers should be honest.
9.​ I will finish the grant application by tomorrow.
●​ 8. Active Voice: Mary Sands typed the newsletter.

Section 8.5: Paragraphs

●​ 1. Transitional Words: These (like however or therefore) act as bridges to show how
ideas are connected.
 ●​ 2. Paragraph Unity: This is achieved when every sentence in the paragraph supports
one main idea (the topic sentence).
●​ 3–6. Grammar Alert:
6.​ When were the iPads shipped?
7.​ Brenda and I will work...
8.​ The committee... meets tomorrow...
9.​ Mr. Hall and I were invited...

Section 8.6: Editing & Proofreading

●​ 1. Grammar-checkers: Advantage: Catches basic typos. Disadvantage: It can miss
the context or give "correct" but awkward suggestions.
●​ 2. Tone: The tone changes based on whether you are writing to a friend (informal) or
a CEO (formal) to ensure the message is received well.
●​ 3. Proofreading Memo: Fix "A.M." to a.m., "noon" to 12 p.m., "Exectutives" to
Executives, and ensure "20%" is written clearly.
●​ 4. Practical Application: Ensure the dates are chronological and the titles (like
Director) are capitalized correctly throughout the paragraph.

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can just grab what you need.

Section 9.1: Message Approaches

●​ 1. Persuasive Approach: Use this when you think the reader might resist your idea or
isn't immediately interested. It needs four parts: Attention, Interest, Desire, and Action
(AIDA).
●​ 2. Direct vs. Indirect: The direct approach puts the main point first, used for good
news. The indirect approach starts with a "buffer" and explanation before giving the
main point, used for bad news or persuasion.
●​ 3–6. Clearer Wording:
6.​ Note that your dividend...
7.​ Because property sales are down...
8.​ About your letter...
9.​ Now, we still have not received...
●​ 7. Sales Memo (Draft): "Rosa, per your request, here are the Q1 sales figures by
region:
○​ Region 1: Jan: $23,494; Feb: $22,577; Mar: $19,482
○​ Region 2: Jan: $33,458; Feb: $32,722; Mar: $25,863
○​ Region 3: Jan: $21,589; Feb: $21,887; Mar: $20,485"

Section 9.2: Memos and E-mails

 ●​ 1. E-mail Advantages: It's way faster than a letter, cheaper, and lets you send the
same info to a bunch of people at once.
●​ 2. Six Purposes: To inform, to request, to confirm, to instruct, to persuade, and to
provide a record.
●​ 3. Call an Editor!: "Aaron Singer... will be here tomorrow... at 10:30 a.m. to show us
his line of window treatments. His best-selling draperies are bow and ribbon swags
and eyelet tiebacks. Our competitors are doing quite well with these two styles, and
we have lost business because we do not carry these items."
●​ 8. Guide Words: TO (recipient), FROM (sender), DATE (when sent), and SUBJECT
(what it's about).

Section 9.3: Letter Formats

●​ 1. Punctuation: Open means no punctuation after the salutation or closing. Standard
means a colon after the salutation and a comma after the closing.
●​ 2. Block vs. Modified-Block: In block format, every line starts at the left margin. In
modified-block, the date and closing lines start at the center of the page.
●​ 3. Mail Call!: "September 12, 2026. Kimberly Johnston, 2443 Southpark Dr., Tampa,
FL 33678. Dear Ms. Johnston: Last week I received..." (Added comma after year,
state abbreviation, and colon).

Section 9.4: Informative Messages

●​ 1. Procedures Book: Use it for training new employees, explaining how to use
equipment, or outlining company policies.
●​ 2. Informative Types: Acknowledgments, confirmations, inquiries, and responses to
inquiries.
●​ 3–6. Dated Expressions:
6.​ Thank you for your letter...
7.​ ...please let us know.
8.​ The information... has been received.
9.​ Thank you for taking the time...

Section 9.5: Goodwill and Requests

●​ 1. Tickler File: It’s a follow-up system organized by date so you don't forget important
deadlines or tasks.
●​ 2. Reply Cards: Advantage: Super easy for the customer to send back.
Disadvantage: They limit how much detail the customer can give.
●​ 3–6. Goodwill Rewrites:
 6.​ We are happy to repair the microwave that was damaged in transit.
7.​ There was a $23 discrepancy on the October 15 invoice.
8.​ We are resending the information in case our previous letter didn't
reach you.
9.​ Please let us know the reason for the delay in payment so we can
help.
●​ 9. Shoe Order Letter: "Mr. Weinard, thank you for your $75 check for the brown Ecco
shoes. To ensure the perfect fit, could you please let us know your shoe size and
width? As soon as we hear back, we'll get them shipped to you."

Section 10.1: Persuasive Messages

●​ 1. Sales Letter Advantages: Unlike radio or TV ads that disappear in seconds, a
sales letter is a physical or digital record the reader can keep and review at their own
pace.
●​ 2. Persuasive Request: This is a message asking for a favor or action when the
reader isn't already motivated to do it. Examples include asking for a donation to a
food pantry or requesting a celebrity to speak at an event.
●​ 3. Collection Procedure: Businesses usually start with a friendly reminder, move to a
formal inquiry about the late payment, then a more urgent appeal, and finally a
last-resort "ultimatum" letter before taking legal action.
●​ Diplomatic Rewrites (4–7):
○​ 4. To proceed with your iPod repair, please provide your warranty number.
○​ 5. This discount is available to customers who present a coupon at the time of
purchase.
○​ 6. Thank you for letting us know about the testing status of your repaired
DVD.
○​ 7. While we typically charge for delivery, we are happy to discuss shipping
options for your refrigerator purchase.

Section 10.2: Claims and Adjustments

●​ 1. Claim Letter Guidelines: You should clearly describe the problem, state exactly
what you want the business to do to fix it (refund, replacement, etc.), and provide all
necessary evidence like dates and model numbers.
●​ 2. Equitable Adjustments: Customers might receive a full refund, a credit, a repair, or
a replacement. A business determines an "equitable" fix by balancing the company's
policy with the goal of keeping the customer happy.
●​ 3. Call an Editor!: "Send me the complete two-volume set of Marketing and
Distribution. I understand I will also receive a one-year subscription to American
Business Today, along with a calendar for business executives. Please refrain from
placing my name on any mailing lists."
Section 10.3: Public Relations
●​ 1. PR Importance: Public relations is vital because it builds a positive reputation,
which creates trust and long-term loyalty with customers.
●​ 2. PR Campaigns: They promote a business by highlighting positive news,
community involvement, or new products to keep the brand in a favorable light.
●​ Rewriting poor techniques (3–5):
○​ 3. Sue borrowed the iPad that was on my desk.
○​ 4. You can use any of these four spreadsheets as a model for your training
course.
○​ 5. While I was waiting for the package, I asked the messenger to wait for Ms.
Downing to sign the cover letter.

Section 10.4: Social-Business Letters

●​ 1. Executive Letterhead: This is high-quality stationery specifically for top-level
managers. It should be used for highly personal or very formal correspondence, like
condolence or major congratulations letters.
●​ 2. Improving PR: Social-business communication (like thank-you notes or congrats
letters) shows that a company values its human relationships, not just the money.
●​ 6. Formal Invitation Template: "The Faculty of Danville Area Community College
cordially invites you to a Retirement Reception honoring Paulette Eaton.
○​ When: Thursday, May 8, at 6 p.m.
○​ Where: Bremer Conference Center, 2000 East Main Street, Danville, Illinois
○​ Refreshments will be served."

Section 10.5: Form Letters

●​ 1. Form Letters: These are pre-written "template" letters used for common situations.
Businesses use them to save time and ensure the information sent out is consistent.
●​ 2. Boilerplate: These are standardized paragraphs that can be "copied and pasted"
into different letters. They ensure that frequently used descriptions or legal info are
always written correctly.
●​ Proofreading Alert (3–6):
○​ 3. Newspaper articles and magazine articles...
○​ 4. Our sales rep in your area...
○​ 5. A helpful highway map gave us directions...
○​ 6. ...decided to participate...

Section 11.1: Report Basics

 ●​ 1. Informative vs. Analytical Reports: An informative report simply provides data and
facts without giving advice (e.g., a monthly sales summary), while an analytical report
examines the data to provide recommendations or solutions (e.g., a feasibility study
on opening a new branch).
●​ 2. Working Bibliography: This is a list of potential sources kept during research to
ensure you can find the information again and give proper credit. Entries should
include the author's name, title, publication date, and publisher.
●​ 3. Blog and Podcast: A blog is an online journal or informational website updated
regularly, while a podcast is a digital audio file available on the internet for
downloading to a computer or mobile device.
●​ 4. Proofreading Alert: "The first 20 seconds of a job interview are the most important.
First impressions at a job interview are a major factor in whether or not you will be
hired. You should make eye contact, smile, and give a firm handshake as soon as
you meet the interviewer."

Section 11.2: Informal Reports

●​ 1. Memo Reports: These are similar to standard memos because they use the same
"To, From, Date, Subject" heading format and are usually used for internal
communication.
●​ 2. Report Formats: Common formats include the memo format, letter format, and
formal manuscript format.
●​ 3–6. Spelling Alert:
6.​ ...exceeded 1.5 million...
7.​ ...February edition...
8.​ ...formally a school teacher.
9.​ ...took a course in interviewing.

Section 11.3: Formal Reports

●​ 1. Purpose and Scope: The purpose is determined by what the report aims to
achieve, and the scope defines the boundaries—what information will be included
and what will be left out.
●​ 2. Appendix and Bibliography: An appendix contains supplemental materials like
charts, maps, or survey samples. A bibliography is a formal list of all sources used or
consulted during the report's preparation.
●​ 3–6. Call an Editor!:
6.​ Ms. Andrews, the new administrative assistant, is proficient in
computer operations.
7.​ Spend an afternoon at the job fair to learn about opportunities for
recent graduates.
8.​ Because the new manager lacked information on loans and
procedures, he decided to deal on a cash basis.
 9.​ I liked the readable graphics in your report; they were accurate and
complete.

Section 11.4: Minutes and Agendas

●​ 1. Importance of Minutes: Minutes provide an official, permanent record of what
happened, what was decided, and what actions need to be taken after a meeting.
●​ 2. Purpose of an Agenda: An agenda is a list of topics to be discussed, sent out
beforehand so participants can prepare and the meeting stays on track.
●​ 3. Spelling Alert: "Harrison, who dislikes meetings, thought the committee meeting
was a waste of time. Everyone else, of course, disagreed. Alice Croft chaired the
meeting and encouraged the members to participate fully. Clark recorded the
minutes—a task that he enjoys and takes seriously. Except for Harrison, we all left
the meeting convinced that a productive meeting had been adjourned."
●​ 6. Listening and Note-taking: The person recording minutes must have excellent
listening skills to accurately capture the main points and decisions without getting
bogged down in every word spoken.
●​ 7. Preparing to Record Minutes: Preparation includes reviewing the agenda,
obtaining a list of attendees, and ensuring you have the necessary tools (laptop,
recorder, or notebook) ready before the meeting starts.

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technology sections you just sent over.

Section 12.1: Workplace Technology

●​ 1. Role of the Internet: The Internet serves as the primary backbone for global
research, instant communication, e-commerce, and real-time collaboration in the
modern workplace.
●​ 2. Cloud Computing Savings: It saves money by reducing the need for expensive
on-site servers and IT hardware, allowing businesses to pay only for the storage and
software they actually use.
●​ 3. Brief Telecommunication (Revision): Pick up Jason Gott, Skybird Flight 15, Friday
8 a.m. Brief him on Tracy-Phelps contract. (14 words)
●​ 4. Brief Telecommunication (Revision): March sales forecast lost. Please fax two
copies immediately. (9 words)

Section 12.2: E-mail and Real-Time Tools

●​ 1. E-mail Effectiveness: E-mail is effective because it is fast, provides a written record
of conversations, and allows for the attachment of large documents and files.
 ●​ 2. Asynchronous vs. Synchronous: Asynchronous communication (like e-mail)
happens with a time lag between sending and receiving. Synchronous
communication (like a phone call or video chat) happens in real-time.
●​ 3. Spelling Alert! (Correction): "Two administrative assistants wanted to share the use
of a computer workstation equipped with a fax machine and a modem. Both
assistants felt this arrangement would work because each assistant types only for
eight hours per day. Each assistant works with three executives. The six executives
agree to the trade."

Section 12.3: Websites and Social Media

●​ 1. Websites and Customers: Websites improve communication by providing 24/7
access to product information, customer support, and online purchasing options.
●​ 2. Social Media in Business: Businesses use social media to build brand awareness,
engage directly with customers through feedback, and run targeted advertising
campaigns.
●​ 3. Grammar Alert! (Correction): "All employees in maintenance will be required to
attend a safety workshop. A workshop is scheduled for the following days and
times.... If there are topics you would like to have covered.... A sign-up sheet for the
workshops is posted in the break room. Personnel who do not sign up by Friday will
be assigned."

Section 12.4: Telecommuting and Collaboration

●​ 1. Telecommuting: Technology like VPNs, high-speed internet, and video
conferencing allows employees to work from home or remote locations while staying
fully connected to the office.
●​ 2. Group Collaboration Benefits: Benefits include the ability for multiple people to edit
a single document simultaneously, easier file sharing, and reduced travel costs for
meetings.
●​ Using Tact! (Rewrites):
○​ 3. To ensure we send the correct towels (catalog no. 0r114), please let us
know your color preference as soon as possible.
○​ 4. We are happy to allow you to redownload your music to resolve the
technical issues you are experiencing.
○​ 5. Our records show a $50 balance remaining from the October invoice;
please let us know if you have any questions regarding the 10-day discount
terms.

Section 13.1: Customer Service Essentials

 ●​ 1. Importance of Referrals: Referrals are a powerful business tool because they act
as a recommendation from a trusted source. They are often more effective and less
expensive than traditional advertising for gaining new clients.
●​ 2. Defining Customer Service: Customer service is the support and advice provided
by a company to those people who buy or use its products or services.
●​ 3. Spelling Alert! (Corrections):
○​ ...a dissatisfied customer...
○​ ...immediately...
○​ ...make a scene.
○​ ...who criticized the quality...
○​ There were oil stains...
○​ ...was not acceptable.

Section 13.2: Customer-Focused Productivity

●​ 1. Laptops and Productivity: Laptop computers allow employees to work from virtually
anywhere, increasing productivity by enabling work during travel or outside of
traditional office hours.
●​ 2. Customer-Focused Organization: This is a business that prioritizes the needs and
satisfaction of the customer in every decision and operation it makes.
●​ 3–8. Proofreading Alert! (Eliminating Repetitions):
8.​ We are planning to revert to personal contacts...
9.​ These forms confuse me because they are alike.
10.​Please repeat the instructions so that everyone understands them.
11.​What files are inside this cabinet?
12.​Experience shows that Michael is reliable.
13.​Evidence indicates that the volcano erupted within the past 200 years.

Section 13.3: Professional Communication

●​ 1. Three Ps of Answering the Phone: These are usually Pleasant, Prompt, and
Professional.
●​ 2. Discretion: Discretion is the quality of behaving or speaking in such a way as to
avoid causing offense or revealing private information. It should be used when
handling sensitive client data or internal company conflicts.
●​ 3. Skills for All: All employees in an organization should have good customer-service
skills, as anyone may interact with a client or represent the brand.
●​ 4. Public Relations Alert! (Tactful Rewrite):
○​ Shawna: "Hello! This is [Company Name]. How may I help you?"
○​ Shawna: "Certainly. Could you let me know which department she is in so I
can get you to the right place?"
○​ Shawna: "I'd be happy to assist. May I ask what this is regarding so I can
ensure she has the information ready when I put you through?"
Section 13.4: Online Service and Conflict
●​ 1. FAQs Benefit: An FAQs (Frequently Asked Questions) section provides customers
with instant answers to common queries without needing to wait for a representative.
●​ 2. Auto Responders: An auto responder aids customer service by providing an
immediate acknowledgement that a message was received, often including an
estimated time for a full response.
●​ 3–7. Grammar Alert! (Agreement Errors):
7.​ ...elevators has been receiving...
8.​ One of the copying machines is not working...
9.​ ...new interns are answering...
10.​The faculty is meeting...
11.​One of the visitors left his or her coat...
●​ 10. Handling Flare-Ups: If a situation becomes unmanageable and tempers flare, you
should remain calm, avoid getting defensive, and involve a supervisor or manager to
help de-escalate the situation.

Section 14.1: Oral Communication

●​ 1. Pitch and Intonation: Pitch refers to how high or low a voice is, while intonation is
the rise and fall of the voice during speech. Both affect speech quality by conveying
emotion, emphasis, and whether a statement is a question or a command.
●​ 2. Enunciation vs. Pronunciation: Enunciation is the act of speaking clearly and
concisely so each sound is heard, whereas pronunciation is the correct way a word is
intended to be spoken. Both are vital for ensuring the listener understands the
message without confusion.
●​ 3–6. Call an Editor! (Corrections):
6.​ How will the new policy affect office morale?
7.​ Which procedures apply to this job?
8.​ The new supervisor was formally introduced to the team today.
9.​ On which site will the new factory be built?

Section 14.2: Conducting Meetings

●​ 1. Standing vs. Ad Hoc Committees: A standing committee is a permanent group that
meets regularly to handle ongoing issues, while an ad hoc committee is a temporary
group formed for a specific, one-time purpose and is disbanded once that goal is
met.
●​ 2. Robert’s Rules of Order: You would use these rules in formal meetings to maintain
order, ensure everyone has a chance to speak, and provide a structured method for
making decisions and voting.
●​ 3–6. Service Please! (Tactful Rewrites):
 6.​ We would like to better understand the issue regarding the lamp bases
to see how we can assist.
7.​ At this time, we are unable to extend credit based on your current
payment history.
8.​ Our records indicate your check has not yet arrived; could you please
verify when it was sent?
9.​ We apologize for the difficulty in delivering your merchandise on the
requested date and are working to resolve this.

Section 14.3: Effective Presentations

●​ 1. Rhetorical Questions: Starting with a rhetorical question helps "set the stage" by
immediately engaging the audience's thoughts, piquing their curiosity, and
introducing the main theme of the speech without requiring an oral response.
●​ 2–6. Vocabulary Alert! (Corrections):
6.​ Please call the personnel office...
7.​ We intended to complete the project...
8.​ To confront serious problems...
9.​ The threat of a tax audit compelled us...
10.​His actions did not prevent our taking...

Section 14.4: Visual Aids and Technology

●​ 1. Design Templates: These aid in creating a slideshow by providing pre-made
layouts, color schemes, and fonts, which ensures a professional and consistent look
throughout the presentation.
●​ 2. Slide Animation: You would use animation to reveal information one point at a
time, which helps keep the audience focused on what you are currently saying rather
than reading ahead.
●​ 3–7. Vocabulary Alert! (Synonyms/Antonyms):
7.​ (b) boisterous and (e) quiet (Antonyms).
8.​ (b) modest and (d) pretentious (Antonyms).
9.​ (a) demise and (c) death (Synonyms).
10.​(b) disparity and (e) equality (Antonyms).
11.​(b) garrulous and (e) talkative (Synonyms).

Section 15.1: Finding a Job

●​ 1. Finding the Hidden Job Market: You can tap into this market through networking,
conducting informational interviews, contacting employers directly even if they
haven't posted an opening, and joining professional organizations.
 ●​ 2. Internship: An internship is a temporary position, often for students or recent
graduates, designed to provide practical on-the-job training and work experience in a
specific field.
●​ 3. Private Employment Agencies (Disadvantages): The main disadvantage is that
these agencies often charge a fee (either to you or the employer), and they may
pressure you to take a position that isn't a perfect fit just to close the deal.
●​ 4–8. Call an Editor! (Corrections):
8.​ Each of the three applicants is qualified.
9.​ It is company policy to conduct drug screening on all new employees.
10.​Our team was asked to develop a schedule for the spring projects.
11.​The report is up-to-date and will be distributed tomorrow.
12.​Jan wrote a recommendation letter in March.

Section 15.2: Résumés

●​ 1. Chronological Résumé: Use this when you have a steady work history with no
major gaps and your most recent experience is directly related to the job you're
seeking.
●​ 2. Functional (Skills) Résumé: This is best if you are changing careers, have
significant gaps in your work history, or are just entering the workforce and want to
highlight your skills rather than your timeline.
●​ 3. Combination Résumé: Use this to highlight specific skills while still providing a
chronological work history to show your career progression.
●​ 4. Scannable Résumé: This is a résumé formatted to be easily read by Applicant
Tracking Systems (ATS). They are used because many large companies use
software to filter candidates based on keywords.
●​ 5–9. Vocabulary Alert! (Corrections):
9.​ ...to access the database.
10.​...through the desert during....
11.​Severe weather delayed....
12.​...for their views on....
13.​...to choose a site for....

Section 15.3: Application Letters and Forms

●​ 1. Purpose of an Application Letter: This is your "cover letter." Its purpose is to
introduce yourself, highlight your most relevant qualifications, and persuade the
employer to read your résumé and grant you an interview.
●​ 2. Application Form Tips: Read the entire form first, follow all instructions exactly, be
neat (if handwriting), ensure all information matches your résumé, and don't leave
any blanks (use "N/A" if necessary).
●​ 3–7. Grammar Alert! (Pronoun Corrections):
7.​ ...to Gordon or me?
 8.​ With whom did you have... (OK).
9.​ ...it was the operator and they who made....
10.​...written by her last summer.
11.​Lori and he volunteered....

Section 15.4: Portfolios

●​ 1. Portfolios in Interviews: A portfolio is a collection of work samples (like reports,
designs, or awards). It helps in an interview by providing "proof" of your skills and
giving you concrete examples to talk about when answering questions.
●​ 2–5. Vocabulary Alert! (Corrections):
5.​ ...helps them improve their morale.
6.​ ...Larry required minor surgery....
7.​ ...on high-quality stationery.
8.​ ...was a waste of time.