Purposive Communication Module
Purposive Communication Module
Introduction
Learning Outcomes
Learning Content
1. ELEMENTS OF COMMUNICATION
a. Source
A message is crafted through a sender who initiates the communication process. It can
be an author of a book, a public speaker, or a teacher who discusses a lesson.
b. Message
c. Channel
Channel is the means of communication. Examples are phone in calls and letters sent
in business transactions. To have an effective communication, communicators should
select the best means of communication.
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d. Receiver
When the message is sent by the sender it is received by the recipient. A receiver can
be an audience in a symposium, a reader who receives the letter or a pedestrian who
reads road signs.
e. Feedback
f. Environment
The sender and receiver’s feelings, mood, place and mindset are called environment.
Both sender and receiver have to consider the setting where communication takes
place. This factor may also hinder effective communication where barriers may interfere
such as noise from the buses or poor signal in phone calls.
g. Context
The meaning conveyed from the message sent by the sender to the receiver is called
context. It is necessary that both the encoder and decoder share common understanding
to achieve effective communication.
h. Interference
Interferences or barriers prevent effective communication. These are factors that hinder
the communication process.
a. Psychological barriers
These are thoughts that hamper the interpreted message received by the receiver such
as dizziness of the listener while the teacher lectures or when the listener is preoccupied
by some other things while listening to the speaker.
b. Physical barriers
These are stimuli from the environment which disrupt communication, weather or climate
conditions and physical health of the communicator.
Word differences are present in different cultures which may result to ineffective
communication.
d. Mechanical barriers
These are interferences which affect channels to transmit the message such as poor
signal or low battery consumption of mobile phones while calling.
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2. TYPES OF COMMUNICATION ACCORDING TO MODE
A message may be impart through these types; verbal-non-verbal and visual. While
communication is often thought of as verbal, the non-verbal mode is equally essential
as it enhances one‘s message.
What makes visual communication even more advantages is that it makes use of
communication even more advantages is that it makes use of technology that provides
apps (applications), videos and images that rely less on the printed word making
presentations more interesting. This leaves a powerful effect on the audience and
prospective clients. Speakers/presenters should be mindful of the content of their
presentation since wrong and irrelevant information may lead to miscommunication.
Likewise, they should pay attention to graphic elements, such as position, color, size,
shape and orientation as all these play an important role in the presentation of slides.
Audience size should be considered as well when preparing slide presentations or other
forms of visuals.
3. COMMUNICATION MODELS
The earliest model that structures how public speaking is undergone is explained
through Aristotle’s model of communication. In this model, Aristotle identified the five
elements which compose the communication process which are the speaker, speech
occasion, audience and effect. This model is speaker-centered which results the
audience as passive. The effect of the speech delivered by the speaker to the audience
in an occasion is that either the listeners be persuaded or not; in this case the
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communication becomes one-way delivery because feedback from the audience is not
expected.
The two-way street flow of communication in which a sender and a receiver send
back and forth messages was popularized by Charles Egerton Osgood. This model
considers communication as circular because both the encoder and decoder take turn
in sending the message. Along the process of communication, the recipients filter to
interpret the meaning of the words sent to them. The different meanings applied to send
messages could become interference in communication known as semantic noise.
In the latter years, Wilbur Schramm adapted Osgood’s model and added another
element in communication called field of experience. Sneha Mishra (2017) identified
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culture, social background, beliefs, experiences, values and rules that correspond to this
element. With great similarity of the recipients’ field of experience, the greater effective
communication is expected.
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EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION
lesson 2
Introduction
People use words and languages every day to interact whether at home or
workplace. The question is, have they communicated their messages effectively? In
order to be effective in communication, there are three parts to be considered: listening,
responding and understanding. Listening entails accepting of words and ideas. This is
also taking nonverbal cues such as facial expression and body language. On the other
hand, Responding is evaluating the worth of message. It requires a psychological
processing which leads to Understanding -giving meaning to the words or expressions
uttered.
Learning Outcomes
Learning Contents
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Michael Osborn (2009) claims that communication must meet certain standards
for effective communication to take place.
c. Courtesy: Courtesy builds goodwill. It involves being polite in terms of approach and
manner of addressing an individual.
e. Consideration: Messages must be geared towards the audience. The sender of the
message must consider the recipient’s profession, level of education, race, ethnicity,
hobbies, interests, passions, advocacies, and age when drafting or delivering a
message.
g. Conciseness: Simplicity and directness help you to be concise. Avoid using lengthy
expressions and words that may confuse the recipient.
2. COMMUNICATION ETHICS
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➢ Here are the guidelines for ethical communication which should shape communication
practice:
POINTS TO PONDER
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They promote access to communication resources and opportunities as
necessary to fulfil human potential and contribute to the well-being of families,
communities, and society.
They accept responsibility for the short- and long-term consequences for
our own communication and expect the same of others. All too often, there have
been people who do not feel accountable for their actions. Therefore, if one risks to
communicate maliciously, spread false news, or incite hatred or violence, he or she
should be ready to face the consequences of such actions.
Source: [Link]
POINTS TO PONDER
Practicing ethics in communication is anticipating and weighing the effects of one’s message
on an audience.
Ethical use of language is also a must when preparing for such deliberate form of
communication.
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Introduction
Local and international business nowadays believe that schools should help
students to think more globally. Cultural awareness and understanding global issues
are particularly valued and are as equally important as learning a foreign language
nowadays. Giving young people an understanding of how the world works can be a
really important skill as thriving in life is concerned (Sutcliffe, 2012).
Learning Outcomes
ideas.
Learning Content
“While the dream of global village holds great promise, the reality is that diverse
people have diverse opinions, values, and beliefs that clash and too often result in
violence.
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Globalization is not the only thing influencing events in the world today, but to
the extent that there is a North Star and a worldwide shaping force, it is this system.
Thomas Friedman (1999 cited from Kluver, 2006) in The Lexus and the Olive Tree
Every is enticed to join in the “new international information order” and that
detailed cultural, social, economic and political conditions are interrelated to people’s
interaction. Likewise, there is a phenomenal change as individuals delve into the
elements of intercultural communication
Five assumptions that take place during intercultural communication: (Neuliep, 2006).
When two speakers from different cultures interact, their values, emotions,
perceptions, and behaviours greatly affect the interpretation of their messages.
“Intercultural communication is a symbolic activity where the thoughts and ideas of one
are encoded into a verbal/or nonverbal message format, then transmitted through
some channel to another person who must decode it, interpret it, and respond to it”
(Neuliep, 2006). Thus cultural noise is filled with encoding, decoding and interpreting
making cultre a smokescreen of all the messages. This allows the speakers to think
that one’s own culture is the center of everything.
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Several Muslims think that hygiene of the body and purity of the soul are correlated.
After menstruation, Muslim women purify themselves. Even before and after meals,
cleanliness is being recommended.
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Assumption #3 Involvement of style in communication among speakers
There are communication gaps and only wisdom tells as whether to when to
speak or not. Interpretation of silence differs from across cultures. Expression of
intimacy in relationships is best demonstrated without words according to Japanese
and some native American tribes. “They believe that having to put one’s thoughts and
an emotion into words somehow cheapens and discounts them.” Neulip (2006).
Several cultures favor in direct and impersonal style in communication. There is no
necessity of saying verbally every message. Neulip (2006). True understanding is
implicit, coming not from words but from actions in the environment where speaker
provide hints or insinuations.”
It is normal to feel anxious, apprehensive and uncertain when one mingles and
speaks to another person from a different culture It is important to be flexible and adapt
a communication style to be able to make the other individual comfortable. Being able
to recognize that people from various cultures are different is really an advantage. This
will lead the speaker to adjust the verbal and nonverbal symbols appropriately to the
individual from another culture.
Cultural Context
“Cultural hides more than it reveal, and strangely enough what it hides most
effectively from its own participants.” -Edward T. Hall (Cited from Neuliep, 2015)
People learn to arrange their ideas, thoughts, emotions and even their
behaviour according to the stimulus of the environment. Thus, culture is not innate
even if people are born into it since culture is always learned. Culture teaches
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individuals to think and behave, therefore a kind of interaction among people is
depicted in various circumstances.
Culture is also associated with geography like Saudi Arabia for instance which
is considered hot and a desert contrary to Siberia which is labelled as mountainous
and cold. James Neulip (2016) explains, “But culture is more a human phenomenon
than a geographic one. And while geography certainly affects how people live within a
particular culture, the people, more than a geography, are what constitute culture. So,
when you think of culture, think of people. That being said, it is also important to
understand that cultures of people are not static, but rather dynamic. This means that
cultures change; they are fluid, always moving.
Low ---------------------------------------------------------------High
Culture may be low and high which demonstrates the magnitude and degree
of how a person affiliates the self. There is no such thing as a pure individualistic of
collectivistic culture.
These cultural dimensions can be opposing or not, fixed or not, static in time
while other cultures move in transition. Likely a culture that is considered collective can
also be individualistic in the passing time such Japan which is thought to be
“collectivistic, group-oriented” community. Nonetheless in 1950s, many Japanese
researchers saw that the young generation of Japanese were becoming individualistic
than their parents and grandparents.
Collectivism -Is the assumption that groups blend well by serving the in-group
(family, neighbors, or occupational groups). People are not viewed as isolated
individuals but rather they are identified by their membership. It emphasizes harmony
and likewise prefers the significance of the group than the individuals being emotionally
linked to it and their bond may last a lifetime. One’s behaviour is role-based, and
deviations from the prescribed role are discouraged and often negatively sanctioned.
In this sense, a person’s behaviour is guided more by shame than by personal guilt. A
collectivist who stands out from the group disrupts the harmony and maybe punished.
Most collectivistic cultures value social reciprocity, obligation, dependence and
obedience.
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Horizontal Individualism speaks of an autonomous self that values the individual more
and independence is being highlighted.
Horizontal Collectivism notes the self as a member of a group sharing the same values
and interests. The self is reliant and equality is expected.
Vertical Collectivism believes that the self is an integral part of the in group even if the
members are different from the other. It also specifies the group’s interdependence and
in equality.
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LESSON 1
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Introduction
Learning Outcomes
Learning Content
When we are communication with people who are very different from us, it is
very difficult to know how to draw inferences about what they mean, and so it is
impossible to depend on shared knowledge and background for confidence in our
interpretation (p.22).
Indeed, the lack of shared knowledge and beliefs and cultural diversity make it
more complicated to arrive at the correct inference or interpretation of meanings. But it
can also be argued that English is now a global lingua franca. In fact, with the ASEAN
integration, English has been declared the official or working language of ASEAN. So
with just one language to be spoken or used by many countries including the 10 member
countries of the ASEAN, what else can go wrong?
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It is thus important to emphasize that the ownership of English cannot be attributed
to just one country or to those who use it as a native or home language. The varieties of
English spoken by different speech communities have evolved for a reason. They use it
for communal purposes. These varieties have been heavily influenced by the local
culture and its speakers. Recent studies have shown that the problem of
misunderstanding is not overt and can’t be traced to speech perturbations, poorly
managed turn-taking, and non-aligned, “parallel talk” (House 1999, p. 80). Meirkord
(2000, p. 11 as cited by Kaur, 2016) emphasizes that communication in English as a
lingua franca (ELF) is “a form of intercultural communication in English as characterized
by cooperation rather than misunderstanding” (p.135). This she noted in her study of
participants coming from 17 different first language backgrounds which yielded the result
that the participants displayed communicative behavior not generally associated with
their linguacultural backgrounds making the talk cooperative and SUPPORTIVE IN
NATURE WITH FEW MISUNDERSTANDINGS.
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The following guidelines may help you enhance your ability to communicate
effectively across cultures (Gamble & Gamble, 2008):
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LESSON 2
Introduction
The spoken mode is often associated with everyday registers while the written
mode is strongly associated with academic registers. However, this is not always true.
For instance, in everyday communication, face to face conversations are usually
supplemented by text messaging. In academic contexts, significant forms of oral
communication are used along with written communication. Significantly, both every day
and academic communications are characterized by multi-modality or the use of multiple
modes of communication, including spoken, written modes and images, music, videos,
gestures, etc.
Learning Outcomes
Learning Content
1. Language varies when communicating with people within (local) and outside (global)
our community.
2. Language varies in speaking and in writing.
3. Language varies in everyday and specialized discourses.
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The first domains include language variations that reflect local usage done in one
local language or multiple local languages depending on the context. They vary in the
following ways:
1. Local everyday written. This may include instances of local everyday written usage
found in the neighborhood posters (e.g. a poster looking for transient/bed spacers).
2. Local everyday oral may occur in local communications among neighbors in everyday,
informal and local varieties of languages.
3. Local specialized written. An example of local specialized written usage can be found
in the publication and web sites of local societies such as the Baguio Midland Courier.
4. Local specialized oral involves specialized discourses. For example, in a computer
shop in the neighborhood, specialized local usage can be found (e.g. specialized
computer game-related vocabulary is used)
On the other hand, the other four domains involve global usage. These four
domains of language usage differ from the first four domains since they refer to context
of language usage where participants need to communicate with people not sharing
their local ways of using language.
They are as follows:
5. Global everyday written avoids local colloquialisms to make the text accessible to
wider communities of readers. This can be found in international editions of newspapers
and magazines.
6. Global everyday oral may occur in interactions between people coming from different
parts of the world when they talk about everyday casual topics.
7. Global specialized written expands to as many readers internationally, hence the non-
usage of local colloquial expressions (e.g. international research journal articles)
8. Global specialized oral occurs when people from different parts of the world discuss
specialized topics in spoken form (e.g. paper presentation sessions in an international
academic conference).
There are five language registers. Each level has an appropriate use that is
determined by differing situations.
a. Frozen
Example:
We, the sovereign Filipino people, imploring the aid of Almighty God, in order to
build a just and humane society, and establish a Government that shall embody our
ideals and aspirations, promote the common good, conserve and develop our patrimony,
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and secure to ourselves and our posterity, the blessings of independence and
democracy under the rule of law and a regime of truth, justice, freedom, love, equality,
and peace, do ordain and promulgate this Constitution (Preamble, 1987 Constitution)
b. Formal/Academic
This language is used in formal setting and is one-way. This use of language
usually follows a commonly accepted format. It is generally impersonal and formal. It is
often used to show respect. Word selection is more sophisticated, and certain words are
always or never used depending on the situation. In a formal register, the story structure
focuses on the plot: It has a beginning and ending and it weaves sequence, cause and
effect, characters, and consequences into the plot.
Example:
“The strongest reason why we ask for woman a voice in the government under
which she lives; in the religion she is asked to believe; equality in social life, where she
is the chief factor; a place in the trades and professions, where she may earn her bread,
is because of her birth right to self-sovereignty; because, as an individual, she must rely
on herself (a speech delivered by Elizabeth Cady Stanton (1892).”
c. Consultative
Example:
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d. Casual/Informal
Example:
Marie: Hey, D! I’m stressing about weight gain on Xmas. Got any ideas for me?
Diane: It’s only one day, so don’t worry too much.
Marie: I’m worried I’ll eat a gazillion calories at my in-laws!
Diane: Just make sure you don’t arrive too hungry, have a healthy snack beforehand
(nuts, granola bar, etc.)
Marie: Yeah, you’re right. Thanks, D! You’re the best! Xx
Diane: No worries, M! xx
e. Intimate
Example:
Register use can help you communicate effectively. Nevertheless, appropriate register
use depends on the situation and the tone of voice you use. It is vital to grasp the
fundamentals of correct register use to communicate well in English. If one register is
expected and another is presented, the result can either be that offense is taken (or
intended) or a comic response. Incorrect register use can cause problems at work, cause
people to ignore you, or, at best, send the wrong message.
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professionals, and anyone wishing to maintain harmonious communicative relations
should be careful in using words and phrases that do not discriminate against particular
groups, whether in terms of race, ethnicity, gender, social class, age, and disability. The
essential point in a way that is respectful of diversity.
Here are some general principles to follow when referring to different groups or
categories:
Next, one must be attuned to the current terminology by which racial and ethnic
groups refer to themselves. This may be done by reading national newspapers and
watching television news, which typically are good indicators of current and preferred
usage. According to Kitty Locker and Donna Kienzler (2013), one should “refer to a
group by the term it prefers,” which means some research is required to find about
acceptable and preferred terms. For example, for a long time, “Native American” has
been considered the politically correct term for the indigenous peoples of the Americas,
over the label “red Indian.” But today, most Native American people prefer to be referred
to by their specific nation or tribe. In the Philippine context, there have been shifts in the
preferences for terms that Filipinos of Chinese ancestry use to describe their identity:
from Tsino, to Chinoy, to Filipino Chinese.
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One should also avoid sexist terms like “a woman lawyer” and “male nurse” and
simply use “lawyer” and “nurse” Pronouns may also be gender-biased, for example,
when the masculine “he” pronoun is used as generic one for both genders.
Gender-biased example: Each student should submit his term paper by Monday.
3. Social Class
There are examples from Philippine culture as well, in the informal terms “conyo”
and “jologs,” both derogatory terms referring to class. The first, used to describe young
people from the upper class who speak an idiosyncratic mix of English and Tagalog,
connotes vanity and consciousness about social status. The second now perhaps
replaced by the term “jejemon”, as used in reference to an idiosyncratic spelling or
writing style, is used to describe persons who look poor and out of style.
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4. Age
5. Disabilities
Finally, when referring to people with disabilities, the focus should be on the
person, not the condition (Arinto, 2009). In Patricia Arinto’s English for the Professions
(2009), she advises writes to avoid hurtful expressions such as “retards” or even the
seemingly neutral description “the mentally retarded” and to use instead “people with
mental retardation.” Similarly, instead of “the blind” and “cancer patients,” one should
instead use “people with vision impairments” and “people being treated for cancer,”
respectively. These examples demonstrate the importance of identity-first language or
the importance of putting the person or people first. Note the difference in the following
sentences:
Disability first: The blind student used a special keyboard during the exam.
Person first: The student, who is visually impaired, used a special keyboard during the
exam.
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Next, Arinto (2009) suggests considering the negative implications of usages
such as “confined to a wheelchair” and “AIDS victim.” For the former, one should instead
write or say “uses a wheelchair” because wheelchairs enable to escape confinement,
while for the latter, one should use “person with “AIDS” as someone who can acquire a
disease without being victimized by it. Arinto (2009) also notes that the word “abnormal”
may be replaced with “atypical” because “people who have disabilities are atypical but
not necessarily abnormal” (Arinto, 2009). These latter examples demonstrate the
importance of not representing people with disabilities as unfortunate, limited, and
helpless victims’.
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Introduction
In this era, media play a crucial role in our lives. Media inform, educate, and
entertain us. The pictures, videos, texts, and all the other forms of mass media shape
the way we think and how we look at our surroundings and influence the way we look at
the world.
In this module, we will analyze and evaluate messages, images, and other
media work using the framework of Media Literacy.
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Learning Outcomes
a. Analyze media messages and/or images using Key Concepts of Media Literacy
Framework; and
b. Create a multimodal advertisement or project of a cause-oriented event.
Learning Content
Brainstorming….
Analyze the drawing and picture below. Generate ideas and concepts about the message
being conveyed by the pictures presented.
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htps://[Link]/newsfeatures/58712/10-ads-that-created-
controversy-2015-edition
Editorial Cartoon
Traditional Media
Social Media
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message? What are their
various jobs?
2. Media messages are • What do you notice… Format
constructed using a (about the way the message
creative language with is constructed)?
its own rules. ▪ Colors? Shapes?
Size?
▪ Sounds, Words?
Silence?
▪ Props, sets, clothing?
▪ Movement?
▪ Composition?
Lighting?
• Where is the camera?
• What is the viewpoint?
• How is the story told
visually? What are people
doing?
• Are there any symbols?
• Visual metaphors?
• What’s the emotional
appeal? Persuasive
devices used?
• What makes it seem
“real?”
3. Different people • Have you ever Audience
experience the same experienced anything like
media message this in your life?
differently. • How close is this portrayal
to your experience?
• What did you learn from
this media text?
• What did you learn about
yourself from
experiencing the media
text?
• What did you learn from
other people’s response?
• From their experience of
life?
• How many other
interpretations could
there be? How could we
hear about them?
• Are other viewpoints
present?
• How can you explain the
different responses?
4. Media have embedded • What kinds of behaviors / Content
values and points of consequences are
view. depicted?
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• What type of person is the
reader / watcher / listener
invited to identify with?
• What questions come to
mind as you watch / read
/ listen?
• What ideas or values are
being “sold” to us in this
message?
• What political ideas are
communicated in the
message? Economic
ideas?
• What judgments or
statements are mad
about how we treat other
people?
• What is the overall
worldview of the
message?
• What ideas or
perspectives are left out?
How would you find
what’s missing?
5. Most media messages • Who’s in control of the Purpose
are organized to gain creation and
profit and/or power. transmission of this
message?
• Why are they sending it?
• How do you know?
• Who are they sending it
to? How do you know?
• What’s being sold in this
message? What’s being
told?
• Who profits from this
message? Who pays for
it?
• Who is served by or
benefits from the
message
– the public?
– private interests?
– individuals?
– institutions?
• What economic
decisions may have
influenced the
construction or
transmission of this
message?
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[Link]
[Link]
1. Picture Analysis
a. Choose one picture and analyze its
contents using the Key Concept Questions.
b. Present your image evaluation through a
PowerPoint or video presentation.
[Link]
racist-thai-advert-3944090/
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In this module, you will learn the different communication aids and strategies
for media presentation and what is best to use in your presentations. This lesson is
important because it will help you to be more confident in making and presenting your
multimedia presentations.
Learning Outcome
Learning Content
Definition
VIDEO
PHOTOG ANIMA
RAPHS TION
MODALITIES
AUDIO TEXT
GRAPHICS
Linking
between Can be made
slides, to into hard copy
other media, printouts or
and to the transparencies.
internet.
Uploadable
Can be
uploaded to
the web.
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C. Strategies Using Tools of Technology
Although the use of technology is personalized and creativity is required, the
following strategies are recommended for effective delivery of information and ideas:
• Keep it simple
• Emphasize your key ideas
• Show what you can’t say
• Use close up shots and other images
• Keep the number of images you present manageable
• Combine variety with coherence
• Use large lettering
Communication Aids
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• Brainshark – provides a web-based applications and products delivered via
software as a service to help companies improve sales effectiveness and productivity.
• [Link] – an American media organization that posts talks online for free
distribution under the slogan “ideas worth spreading”.
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CHAPTER
Introduction
Learning Outcomes
The saying shown above gives us an idea on what effective communication is.
But what is it really about? What are the primary reasons why we communicate?
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1. Purpose: Many people find it difficult to communicate well because the first thing they
think about is what they are supposed to say. A better strategy however is to determine
your purpose: why do you want or need to communicate?
2. Audience: After identifying your purpose, what you need to identify next is your
audience or who is going to receive your message. It is vital that your message is
specifically tailored to your audience so as to ensure effective communication.
3. Message structure: How are you going to convey your message? There are two
ways you can use: the direct and indirect approach. The direct approach is deductive.
This means that you state your main idea first then follow it up with supporting
statements. You can use this approach if you are emphasizing a result rather than the
steps you took to arrive to that idea. The indirect approach on the other hand is inductive.
This means that you start your message with a background and lead your audience to
the main idea. This is the traditional approach and you can use this if you want to
establish a common ground with your audience first.
4. Channel: After creating the message, you now have to choose an appropriate channel
to send it through. Will it be a written communication or a verbal one? If it is verbal, will
it be done face-to-face or through the telephone? Remember, the channel you choose
has a large impact on the effectiveness of your message that is why it is important to
consider its appropriateness.
Now that you know the things you have to consider in communicating effectively,
you now have to master the identification of the most important aspect of
communication: the purpose.
One mark of literacy is the ability to seek out and understand information from
various channels of communication. These channels may be formal or informal.
Furthermore, the 21st Century has ushered in so many information sources that getting
information can be as easy with a few taps or clicks in a gadget. Given below are some
of the channels by which you can obtain information (The Health Foundation, 2017):
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Considering the richness of your information source is also important. You have
to know which channel of communication can provide you with the best and the most
information. Traditionally, channels that are done through physical presence such as
meetings can give the most reliable and richest information source. This is followed by
personal interactive such as communication done through the telephone or through the
internet such as webinars. The leanest information sources on the other hand come from
impersonal interactive channels such as e-mails and social media as well as impersonal
static channels like letters, reports, news updates and newsletters.
The claim is the statement that you want to be accepted by your audience. It is
the thesis statement that overarches everything else you will say. It is in turn supported
by evidence which is also called grounds. The evidence is vital in ensuring that you will
persuade your audience to believe your claim. And finally, you have the warrant which
is the underlying justification connecting the claim to the evidence. For a clearer
understanding of these three components, look at the example:
Evidence: Police reports have shown that many crimes are committed at
night and a lot of them involve the youth. Gang wars are
common as well as petty robberies.
While persuasion and argument is done in both informal and formal set-ups in your
everyday life, the most common channel by which this is done is through public
speaking. Now when you engage in public speaking to persuade, the first thing that you
have to clearly define is your proposition.
The proposition is the overall direction of your content and it can be classified
into three as follows:
Ex. Most juvenile-committed crimes take place when idle youth get together at nights in
the streets, police reports indicated.
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3. Proposition of policy: This focuses on advocating whether something should or should
not be done.
Ex. Implementing night curfew ordinances can help alleviate juvenile crimes.
After setting your proposition, you now move on to organizing your speech. You
may use the following as your discussion templates:
a. Problem-solution
b. Problem-failed solution-proposed solution
c. Cause-effect
d. Cause-effect-solution
When you are brainstorming for your content, it is helpful if you remember these
three points: (1) if your audience already agrees with your proposition, work on
intensifying their agreement and trying to move them into action; (2) if audience is
neutral, give them a background of the issue so that they will see the relevance of your
argument; and (3) if your audience disagrees with your proposition, emphasize on
establishing your credibility, point out some common grounds to establish rapport with
them and add counterarguments to refute their opposing belief.
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Types of Communication in the Workplace
A. Internal
This refers to the exchange of communication within the organization. Again, there
are various channels from which these are exchanged in such as telephones, e-mails
and hard copy of documents such as memorandums and letters.
B. External
This refers to the exchange of communication from the organization to the outside
world. It can be formal and informal.
A. Minutes of a Meeting
Meeting minutes are the written documentation used in informing employees (both
attendees and non-attendees) on what was discussed during a meeting. Usually, it
includes (Heathfield, 2012):
1. Participants’ names
2. Agenda
3. Decisions made by the participants
4. Follow-up actions committed to by the participants
5. Any other discussions worthy of documentation
B. Memorandum
The memorandum is used for communicating policies, procedures and other related
official business within an organization. It is composed of the following (University of
Minnesota):
1. Header
2. Date
3. Subject line
4. Message (Declaration, Discussion and Summary)
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C. Letters
These are brief messages that are usually sent outside the organization. The
business letter type is used in the workplace and it contains the following elements:
1. Return address: This is usually indicated in the letterhead or the footer and it
indicates where someone could send a reply.
2. Dateline: Placed on top of the page, five lines from the top of the page or the
letterhead.
3. Inside Address: This indicates the name of the person you are sending the
letter to. Include the title or position of the person as well as the name of
his/her organization.
4. Salutation: This must always be formal. Do not use the word “Dear”, instead,
address it Sir or Madam depending on your need.
5. Body: Written in text form, the paragraphs must be separated by a line in
between.
6. Complementary Close: This should be formal and the most appropriate is
“Respectfully yours”.
7. Signature line: Skip two lines after the complementary close and indicate your
complete name.
Reports
The reports done in the workplace usually compose of evaluation or assessment
of an issue or a set of circumstances of operations relevant to the organization. It is
written in an abbreviated style which allows the reader to go through it as quickly as
possible.
Headings and subheadings are used to indicate the different sections and if
necessary, bullet points, tables and diagrams are also included. Meintjes (n.d.) states
that the main function of any report is to deliver information quickly, clearly and
efficiently.
On the other hand, a resource from the Online Writing and Learning Link (2010)
gives a more comprehensive list on the purposes of the report:
• Examine possible solutions to a problem, situation or issue
• Apply business and management theories to practical situations
• Demonstrate analytical reasoning and evaluation skills in formulating possible
solutions and outcomes
• Identify conclusions to a problem or issue
• Provide recommendations for future actions
• Demonstrate concise and clear communication skills
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3. Introduction: In this part, you can describe the details of your report and state
the rationale.
4. Procedure: Here, you must describe the method of information-gathering you
used.
5. Findings: This is the presentation of your data in a concise and logical way.
You can present opinions and statements from relevant people or sources and
include graphics if appropriate.
6. Conclusions: This part sums up your assessment of what you have found out.
7. Recommendations: You may give suggestions or call to action for the future
based on your conclusions.
8. Bibliography: This should be listed in alphabetical order in a referencing style
recommended by your organization.
2. Prayer
3. Opening Remarks
5. Lecture Proper
6. Closing Remarks
TAKE A BREATHER
The word memorandum originates from the gerundive of the Latin word
memorare which means “something to be remembered”. The word, therefore, was
originally used as an adjective and was placed at the head of a note for future
reference.
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CHAPTER
Introduction
Learning Outcomes
Learning Content
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Communication is critical in
getting the job done, as well as
building a sense of trust and
increasing the productivity of
employees.
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Given below are some of the channels by which you can obtain information (The
Health Foundation, 2017):
Considering the richness of your information source is also important. You have
to know which channel of communication can provide you with the best and the most
information. Traditionally, channels that are done through physical presence such as
meetings can give the most reliable and richest information source. This is followed by
personal interactive such as communication done through the telephone or through the
internet such as webinars.
The leanest information sources on the other hand come from impersonal
interactive channels such as e-mails and social media as well as impersonal static
channels like letters, reports, news updates and newsletters.
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Communication for Journalists: Writing A Lead
News writing strives to answer “The Five W’s and H:” that is, Who, What, When,
Where, Why and How. Good leads answer as many of these questions as possible in a
single sentence. When writing a lead, it helps to think about which of these facts is the
most vital for readers to know.
Keep It Short. A good lead provides all the information the reader requires in just a few
words. Ideally, a lead should be between 25 and 40 words.
Keep It Simple. Don’t clutter up the lead with unnecessary adjectives or adverbs. Also
make sure that your lead only discusses one idea to avoid confusion.
Write in Active Voice. Avoid all forms of the verb “to be.” Common exceptions including
writing about fatalities (“two people were killed Thursday”) and when discussing police
activity (“two people were arrested”). Passive voice is often the result of incomplete
reporting.
Structure Your Lead Properly. Put your most crucial information at the very beginning
of the sentence. Important secondary information can go in subsequent sentences. Not
following this practice is called “burying the lead.” If you need attribution in your lead,
make sure it goes toward the end of the sentence because it is less important than the
information itself.
Understand the Context. Keep in mind what your readers may already know about
your story based on previous media coverage. Write in a way that speaks to these
realities and adds relevant, useful information.
Be Honest. Never mislead the reader. If you promise a certain type of information with
your lead, you should be ready to deliver.
Once you understand these cardinal rules, you can begin to experiment with style.
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7 Types of Leads
Style implies a certain degree of voice and personal ownership over how a story
is written. Although there are many ways to write leads, here are seven common
approaches.
Straight Lead. Also called the “summary” lead, this is by far the most common and
traditional version; it should be used in most cases. It is a brief summary, containing
most of the Five W’s and H in one sentence.
“The European Parliament voted Tuesday to ratify the landmark Paris climate
accord, paving the way for the international plan to curb greenhouse gas emissions to
become binding as soon as the end of this week.”
Anecdotal Lead. The anecdotal lead uses a quick, relevant story to draw in the reader.
The anecdote must help enhance the article’s broader point, and you must explain the
connection to that point in the first few sentences following the lead.
“At the dilapidated morgue in the northern Brazilian city of Natal, Director Marcos
Brandao walks over the blood-smeared floor to where the corpses are kept. He points
out the labels attached to the bright metal doors, counting out loud. It has not been a
particularly bad night, yet there are nine shooting victims in cold storage.”
Scene-Setting Lead. The scene-setting lead describes the physical location where a
story takes place.
“On the second floor of an old Bavarian palace in Munich, Germany, there’s a library
with high ceilings, a distinctly bookish smell and one of the world’s most extensive
collections of Latin texts. About 20 researchers from all over the world work in small
offices around the room.”
First-Person Lead. This lead describes the journalist’s personal experience with the
topic. It should only be used when you have a valuable contribution and perspective that
help illuminate the story.
“For many of us, Sept. 11, 2001 is one of those touchstone dates — we remember
exactly where we were when we heard that the planes hit the World Trade Center and
the Pentagon. I was in Afghanistan.”
Observational Lead. When offering an authoritative observation about a story and how
it fits in with the larger picture, you should make sure you know the broader context of
your subject matter.
“Tax records and literary criticism are strange bedfellows. But over the weekend,
the two combined and brought into the world a literary controversy — call it the Ferrante
Furor of 2016.”
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Zinger Lead. The zinger lead is dramatic and attention-grabbing. Although it has a
strong tone, it requires a hard set of facts to back it up.
“His last meal was worth $30,000 and it killed him.” (The story was about a man
who died while trying to smuggle cocaine-filled bags in his stomach.)
Question Lead. Question leads do just that: ask a question. Although they are effective
in sparking interest, use them sparingly because they generally do not provide the main
points of a story as concisely.
“What’s increasing faster than the price of gasoline? Apparently, the cost of court
lobbyists.”
Ultimately, understanding the types of leads and style options available can help
journalists tell stories as clearly and effectively as possible.
Objective
SWOT Analysis
1. Internal factors. Internal factors are things that we can control. An example is
when workers in a company spend time and effort on fixing compute crashes. As
a solution to this problem, the employees could be trained and better software
could be purchased.
2. External factors. External factors are things we cannot control. For example is
inflation rate of goods due to government regulations.
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Internal Analysis External Analysis
Continual Feedback
Continual Feedback
Implementation and
management of the chosen
strategy
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D. How to make SWOT analysis
1. Make sure that the analysis heads to the right path or direction by defining your
objective. If your study focuses on what matters, this will eventually provide you a
right strategy. ,
2. Focus on the internal and external factors.
a. Strengths. Identify the things that do better in your company rather than the
competition. Are the people familiar to your products or brand? What is your
competitive advantage? Which one from your internal resources is doing best or
the one that excels in all aspects of intellectual property or human resources?
b. Weaknesses. In what areas are your competitors outclassing your company?
What holds your business back? Are there any things you can avoid? Does your
business lack something? Or weakness? For example, it may not have enough
suitably-skilled workers. This is an area that you can control.
c. Opportunities. Opportunities can help your company grow. Can you turn any
changes in technology, laws, or society, for example, into an opportunity?
Consumers today are more aware of and interested in the quality of life.
d. Threats. Are obstacles stopping your company from growing? What are these
rules, regulations, or technology that impede your business? Some aspects of
society may also repent obstacles. Is inflation rate a threat to the business?
Strengths Weaknesses
Opportunities How do I use these strengths to How do I overcome the
take advantage of these weaknesses that prevent me
opportunities? from taking advantage of these
opportunities?
Threats How do I use my strengths to How do I address the
reduce the impact of threats? weaknesses that will make these
threats a reality?
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SWOT Analysis of a Coffee Shop
STRENGTHS WEAKNESS
OPPORTUNITIES THREATS
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Writing Business and Technical Report
Objectives:
1. List the types of reports you usually do in school. How do you frame such report?
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2. Search for sample of old reports online from student councils, government offices,
companies, schools, hospitals, and other organizations.
3. Draw a Venn diagram to show the similarities and differences of school reports
and the report that you brought.
Venn Diagram
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A report is a comprehensive document that covers aspects of the subject matter of study. It
presents results of an experiment, investigation, research or an inquiry to a specific audience.
Characteristics of a Report
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Types of lnformal Report
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Types of Formal Reports
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Parts of a Report
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Findings Results, • The goal is to supply proofs for Factual, use
investigation conclusions. of third
, research • Discuss, analyze, and interpret of (don't person, use of
and just give results, also say what they mean passive verbs
calculation — particularly with benchmarking).
• Remember to report on of your research,
including interviews with client and
personal observations (discuss in
methodology too).
• Support your findings with new evidence.
• Provide summary paragraph of key
findings and their significance at end of
section.
• Explain all graphs in writing.
• Arrange the findings in logical segments
that follow your outline.
• Findings should be presented in the same
order as discussed in methodology.
• Use clear, descriptive headings.
• Present “just the facts”, no opinions and no
feelings.
Conclusion Conclusion • Interpret and summarize the findings. Transition
drawn from • Say what they mean. signals such
the findings • Relate the conclusions to the report as it seems
issue/problem. that, the
• Limit the conclusions to the data results
presented, do not introduce new material. indicate that, it
• Number the conclusions and present them is probable
in parallel form. that, etc.
• Be objective: avoid exaggerating or
manipulating the data.
Recommen Things that • Make specific suggestions for actions to
dation should be solve the report problem
done as a • Avoid conditional words such as maybe
result and perhaps
• Present each suggestion separately and
begin with a verb
• Number of recommendations
• Describe how the recommendations may
be implemented (if you were requested to
do this)
• Arrange the recommendations in an
announced order, such as most important
to least important.
Bibliography Books,
magazines,
journals,
report, and
other
references
used
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Communication for Employment: The Resume
Objectives:
What is a resume?
Types of resume
1. Print résumés are printed on Paper for prospective employers to scrutinize. They
are designed to emphasize key information using bold or italic typeface.
2. Scannable résumés are designed to be read by computers; hence, they are to be
formatted using single typeface or without italics or bold.
PRINT RÉSUMÉS
Name in
Franchesca U. Morales
20 Evangensta Street Boldface
Leonila Hill, Baguio City 2600
+63917-245-2288
chescamorales@gmail com
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• Reconciled and reported on reasons of
discrepancies of count and computations
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SCANNABLE RÉSUMÉS
All information
Franchesca U. Morales in a single
typeface,
Key words: Public relations; accountant; auditor,
bookkeeper, sales; independent worker; responsible: hardworking: aligned on left
English language fluency margin
Address
20 Evangelista Street
Leonila Hill, Baguio City 2600
Phone: +63917-245-2288
E-mail: chescamorales@[Link]
Education
B.S. in Accountancy, Santa Catalina College, La
Trinidad, Benguet
Experience
Inventory Clerk. April-October 2015
Philex Mining Corporation. Benguet
Reconciliation and report on reasons of discrepancies of count and
computations.
Honors
Dean's Lister from 2008-2010
Loyalty Medalist
Skills
Microsoft Office; SPSS for Windows; Eudora Pro;
PowerPoint, fluency in English and Filipino languages,
Driving
Activities
Varsity player in Volleyball
Organization Fund raiser
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C. Parts of a Resume / Organizing your Resume (Sections)
a. Heading
• At the top of your résumé, include your name, address, telephone number
(home or cell), and a professional e-mail address.
• Make sure that your name stands out on the page.
• If you have both a school address and a permanent home address, place your
school address on the left side of the page and your permanent home address
on the right side of the page.
• Do not use a clever or hobby-related e-mail address in employment
correspondence; e-mail addresses that are based on your last name work
well.
b. Job Objective
• An objective introduces the material in a résumé and helps the reader quickly
understand your goal.
• If you decide to include an objective, use a heading such as “Objective,”
“Employment Objective,” “Career Objective,” or “Job Objective.”
• State your immediate goal and, if you know that it will give you an advantage,
the direction you hope your career will take.
• Try to write your objective in no more than three lines, and tailor it to the
specific job for which you are applying, as illustrated in the following examples:
• A full-time computer-science position aimed at solving engineering problems
and contributing to a management team.
• A position involving meeting the concerns of women, such as family planning,
career counseling, or crisis management.
• Full-time management of a high-quality local restaurant.
• A summer research or programming position providing opportunities to use
software-development and software-debugging skills.
c. Qualifications Summary
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• You may wish to include a brief summary of your qualifications to persuade
hiring managers to select you for an interview.
• Sometimes called a summary statement or career summary, a qualifications
summary can include skills, achievements, experience, or personal qualities
that make you especially well suited to the position.
• You may wish to give this section a heading such as “Profile,” “Career
Highlights,” or simply “Qualifications.” For example, “Award-Winning Senior
Financial Analyst”
d. Education.
• List the school(s) you have attended, the degree(s) you received and the
dates you received them, your major field(s) of study, and any academic
honors you have earned.
• List courses only if they are unusually impressive or if your résumé is
otherwise sparse
• Consider including the skills developed or projects completed in your course
work.
• Mention your high school only if you want to call attention to special high
school achievements, awards, projects, programs, internships, or study
abroad.
e. Employment Experience.
• Organize your employment experience in reverse chronological order, starting
with your most recent job and working backward under a single major heading
called “Experience,” “Employment,” “Professional Experience,” or the like.
• You could also organize your experience functionally by clustering similar
types of jobs into one or several sections with specific headings such as
“Management Experience” or “Major Accomplishments.”
• One type of arrangement might be more persuasive than the other, depending
on the situation.
• In general, follow these conventions when working on the “Experience”
section of your résumé.
• Include jobs or internships when they relate directly to the position you are
seeking. Although some applicants choose to omit internships and temporary
or part-time jobs, including such experiences can make a résumé more
persuasive if they have helped you develop specific related skills.
• Include extracurricular experiences, such as taking on a leadership position
in a college organization or directing a community-service project, if they
demonstrate that you have developed skills valued by potential employers.
• List military service as a job; give the dates served, the duty specialty, and the
rank at discharge. Discuss military duties if they relate to the job you are
seeking.
• For each job or experience, list both the job and company titles. Throughout
each section, consistently begin with either the job or the company title,
depending on which will likely be more impressive to potential employers.
• Under each job or experience, provide a concise description of your primary
and secondary duties. If a job is not directly relevant, provide only a job title
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and a brief description of duties that helped you develop skills valued in the
position you are seeking. For example, if you were a lifeguard and now seek
a management position, focus on supervisory experience or even experience
in averting disaster to highlight your management, decision-making, and
crisis-control skills.
• Focus as much as possible on your achievements in your work history
(“Increased employee retention rate by 16 percent by developing a training
program”). Employers want to hire doers and achievers.
• Use action verbs (for example, “managed” rather than “as the manager”) and
state ideas succinctly. Even though the résumé is about you, do not use “I”
(for example, instead of “I was promoted to Section Leader,” use “Promoted
to Section Leader”).
• For electronic résumés that will be scanned for keywords, however, replace
such verbs with nouns (instead of “managed” use manager).
D. Features of a Resume
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1. Organization
There are different ways on how you can organize your resume depending on
your goals, experiences and qualifications. You can organize a resume chronologically,
functionally, or targeted.
a. Chronological resume is the general listing of all your academic and work
experience from the most recent to the oldest.
b. Functional resume is organized around various kinds of experience. If you want
to demonstrate a lot of experience in more than one area and if you wish to
downplay dates, you may write this type of resume.
c. Targeted resume generally announces the specific goal up to top, just beneath
your name, and offers information selectively. You can show only the experience
and skills relevant to your goal.
2. Succinctness
A resume must be concise. Entries may not be written in sentences but should
be parallel. For instance, “Organized inventory records” rather than “I organized
inventory records.” For print resume, use action verbs (organized, designed, etc…)
rather than nouns (organizer etc…) to emphasize your accomplishments. For
scannable resume, use nouns rather than verbs as key words.
3. Comprehensiveness
A resume must present all important details that can gain the nod of the
prospective employer. In giving details, however, carefully choose the words that you
use. You may use the exact words in the advertisement provided that they really
reflect your experiences or qualifications. Check all the information you provided -
from the contact information down the references. Make sure that all information are
reflected correctly and that those whom you placed in the references know that you
placed them as Sources of information for your employment before sending the
resume.
4. Design
The resume should be reader-friendly and be professionally packaged. For
print resume, use appropriate spacing, section headings, and uniform typeface for
each headings. Scannable resume, on the other hand, shall only have one standard
typeface.
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Learning Outcomes
Learning Contents
The main purpose of the application letter is to convince trhe reader that the
applicant is able and qualified for the position; the writer should confirm that he is a
person of good character and values. Although this can not be written directly into the
letter, it is suggested by the qualities of the letter and the references that the applicant
provides.
The successful letter of application is one which makes a strong and favorable
impression upon the reader. Therefore, it should be well-written, clearly worded, and
properly formatted.
There are two types of letter of application: the solicited letter replying to an
advertisement either in print or in broadcast media, and the unsolicited letter. Both
conform to the same principles.
The cover letter, also called a letter of application or face letter, accompanies
the resume. The application should not be more than one page long if it is
accompanied by a data sheet or a resume although this rule is subordinate to the
effectiveness and completeness of the letter.
The character references are at least three persons who can vouch for the
capabilities, personality, and character traits of the writer. They should be credible
personalities, who are successful in their chosen fields of endeavor.
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After the letter of application is presented comes the interview. After the
interview, the applicant may send a thank you letter answers to some questions raised
during the interview. Theapplicant may preferably send more samples of his work or
show continued interest. Follow up letters serve the same purpose of convincing the
employer of the sincerity of the applicant and his capability for the job he is applying
for.
If you are applying for an advertised position, have the ad in front of you and
refer to it frequently. Be sure to address all the job requirements in the letter.
Match some of the keywords and skills from the advertisement or company
Website with the skills in your resume and letter.
Return Information
It is now permissible to only include your name, E-mail address and cell phone
number. It is acceptable to eliminate your address due to privacy and safety issues. Be
sure your E-mail address is mature and professional. Ideally, it should contain parts of
your name for ease of use.
Inside/Letter Address
It is very important that you address your letter carefully. After spending time
making your letter perfect, you do not want it to be directed to the wrong person or get
lost in the mail.
If there is a contact name on the ad, address your letter to that person. (Mr. John
Smith)
If you are writing to a company for a job, the chances are that unless you have
contacts on the inside you will not know the name of the person you need to use in the
inside address. In this case you can address your letter to the manager of the specific
department (Sales Manager, Personnel Manager, etc.) or use Ladies and Gentlemen.
You should also make sure that the recipient's name, department and address
details on the envelope are the same as at the top of the letter.
Salutation
This is also known as the greeting. The person’s name should be followed by a
colon (:) or left blank. Do not use a comma. (Commas are permissible for use in
personal letters; not business letters.)
Dear Mr. Smith: If you know the name of the person to whom you are writing.
Dear Ms. Chambers: If you are not sure of the marital status of a female recipient.
Ladies and Gentlemen: If you have no idea as to the name of the recipient.
Body
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The body of the letter contains four basic parts and should be three or four
paragraphs long. These paragraphs should attract the employer’s attention; state your
interest in the company and position; arouse the employer’s desire to interview you;
and request that the employer take action in the form of an interview. (AIDA)
First Paragraph
Identify the purpose of the letter—why you are writing. Be specific. Tell the reader
how you learned about a job opening. Tell the employer what job you want.
Examples:
Referrals and leads from friends and family members (networking) are the best
way to learn about a job. Most employers enjoy getting referrals. They trust the
recommendation of a valued employee or friend who states that you would be a good
employee.
Examples:
Second Paragraph
Examples:
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student government. With these experiences, I can offer you excellent communication
and interpersonal skills. During the school year, I
• maintain a 3.0 average and work ten hours per week. My technical skills include
familiarity with Windows, Microsoft Office applications and Google Docs. I use the
Internet regularly and can keyboard more than 45 words per minute.
Third Paragraph
Emphasize what you can do for the company. Outline a relevant career
goal. For example, if you are applying for sales positions, do not say that you are
training to be an airline pilot. Expand on the most relevant points of your resume.
Example:
Fourth Paragraph
Request action. For example, indicate your desire for a personal interview and
that you're able to meet with the employer at their convenience. Include your cell phone
number and when it would be a good time to call.
Some advertisements ask you to include salary requirements. You can choose
to ignore this. You can either wait until the interview to talk about money and mention a
broad salary range.
Examples:
• You can reach me on my cell phone any day after 4 p.m. E-mail is also a great
way to contact me as I check it daily. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
• I hope that my qualifications are of interest to you and that an interview might be
arranged at your convenience. I can be reached at (717) 876-5432 or a message
can be left on my cell phone. I look forward to meeting you.
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Finish your letter with an appropriate Complimentary Closing (Sincerely, or
Sincerely yours,). Leave enough room to sign the letter before keying your name. Do
not forget to sign it. Remember to include an enclosure notation at the bottom.
This application letter sample shows the correct format you should use when
sending out your application letter in print form. If you plan on submitting your application
letter via email, refer to the second application letter sample below.
Sample #1:
22 H Venture St.,
Diliman, Quezon City
Philippines
As a Business Administration student, majoring in HR management, I’ve become equipped with the
necessary knowledge that come with the position including manpower recruitment, workforce
organization, personnel training and compensation as well as legal provisions and other labor
concerns.
My internship at San Miguel Corporation also afforded me with the crucial skills to work with some of
the best professionals in the recruitment and human resources industry. Being a trainee has developed
in me enthusiasm and a true passion for human resources and has subsequently convinced me that
human resource management is my true calling.
For additional details regarding my qualification and expertise, please review my attached resume.
Thank you for taking the time to consider this application and I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
(signature)
Jessica Cenadoza
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Sample #2.
I would like to express my interest in applying for the position of Marketing Associate as was recently
made available in your company.
I believe that my degree in Business Administration (BSBA) major in Marketing from the Philippine
School of Business Administration (PSBA) has prepared me for this position. As a student, I was
equipped with the necessary knowledge and skills to help develop and drive effective marketing
strategies.
I have also acquainted myself with a wide range of skills that allow me to blend with the group or
team’s culture and to continuously strive to reach common goals amidst failures and setbacks.
My active involvement in many academic and extracurricular activities has done so well in developing
my communication and leadership skills, which are vital in finding success in the corporate world.
With this application letter, I attach herewith my resume for your full consideration. Thank you for
taking time to review my application and I am looking forward to your reply so that we can further
discuss my application.
Yours sincerely,
Alvin C. Marfal
7194 Marcelo Ave
Parañaque City, Metro Manila 1700
Mobile: +63 929 XXX XXXX
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Learning Outcomes
Learning Content
Memorandum/Memoranda (Memos)
Some situations when a memo would not be appropriate even though the
message is between people in the same organization:
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3. They are usually informal.
Parts of a Memo
Standard memos are divided into segments to organize the information and to
help achieve the writer's purpose.
Heading Segment
Make sure you address the reader by his or her correct name and job title. You
might call the company president "Maxi" on the golf course or in an informal note, but
"Rita Maxwell, President" would be more appropriate for a formal memo. Be specific
and concise in your subject line. For example, "Clothes" as a subject line could mean
anything from a dress code update to a production issue. Instead use something like,
"Fall Clothes Line Promotion."
Opening Segment
The purpose of a memo is usually found in the opening paragraph and includes:
the purpose of the memo, the context and problem, and the specific assignment or
task. Before indulging the reader with details and the context, give the reader a brief
overview of what the memo will be about. Choosing how specific your introduction will
be depends on your memo plan style. The more direct the memo plan, the more explicit
the introduction should be. Including the purpose of the memo will help clarify the
reason the audience should read this document. The introduction should be brief:
approximately the length of a short paragraph.
Context
The context is the event, circumstance, or background of the problem you are
solving. You may use a paragraph or a few sentences to establish the background and
state the problem. Oftentimes it is sufficient to use the opening of a sentence to
completely explain the context.
Example:
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Include only what your reader needs, but be sure it is clear.
Task Segment
One essential portion of a memo is the task statement where you should describe
what you are doing to help solve the problem. If the action was requested, your task may
be indicated by a sentence opening like,
Examples:
"To determine the best method of promoting the new fall line, I will...."
Summary Segment
If your memo is longer than a page, you may want to include a separate summary
segment. However, this section is not necessary for short memos and should not take up
a significant amount of space. This segment provides a brief statement of the key
recommendations you have reached. These will help your reader understand the key
points of the memo immediately. This segment may also include references to methods
and sources you have used in your research.
Discussion Segments
The discussion segments are the longest portions of the memo, and are the parts
in which you include all the details that support your ideas. Begin with the information that
is most important. This may mean that you will start with key findings or recommendations.
Start with your most general information and move to your specific or supporting facts.
(Be sure to use the same format when including details: strongest to weakest.) The
discussion segments include the supporting ideas, facts, and research that back up your
argument in the memo. Include strong points and evidence to persuade the reader to
follow your recommended actions. If this section is inadequate, the memo will not be as
effective as it could be.
Closing Segment
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After the reader has absorbed all of your information, you want to close with a
courteous ending that states what action you want your reader to take. Make sure you
consider how the reader will benefit from the desired actions and how you can make those
actions easier.
Example:
"I will be glad to discuss this recommendation with you during our Tuesday trip to
the spa and follow through on any decisions you make."
Necessary Attachments
Make sure you document your findings or provide detailed information whenever
necessary. You can do this by attaching lists, graphs, tables, etc. at the end of your
memo. Be sure to refer to your attachments in your memo and add a notation about
what is attached below your closing, like this:
Example:
Formats of Memorandum
This sample memo format includes some tips about how to write your memo.
These tips are also included in the memorandum template.
To: [Audience]
From: [Person and/or Department issuing the memo]
Date: [Date Sent]
Subject: [Subject of the Memo]
[Opening – Get to the point in the opening paragraph. Keep things simple and short. Make it easy
and fast to read.]
[Summary – Provide enough background so all readers understand the history, but again, keep it
simple.]
[Opening – Get to the point in the opening paragraph. Keep things simple and short. Make it easy
and fast to read.]
Sample Memorandum
MEMORANDUM
This is to remind the division that, starting today, we are now filing all Testing Procedure
Specification (TPS) reports with new cover sheets.
The reason for this change is simple. In addition to a new format, the cover sheets provide a
summary of the report as well as the updated legal copy. The new cover sheets also include
Initech's new logo.
Though this change may initially seem like a headache and an extra step, it is necessary to include
the new cover sheets due to their updated information. Failing to do so will result in a confusing and
inaccurate product delivered to our customers.
Best regards,
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Parts of the e-mail includes:
To:
From: Example:JCRUZ@[Link]
The e-mail address of the sender and the user is composed of the user id and the domain.
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Learning Outcomes
The minutes are the account of the meeting. They serve as the official record of
the meeting. The minutes are written by the secretary from notes trhat he makes during
the meeting. The minutes are circulated to members before the next meeting at which
they have to be approved by the members before being confirmed by the chairperson.
The meeting minutes is known as protocol or note, minutes are the live written
record of a meeting. They include the list of attendees, issues raised, related responses,
and final decisions taken to address the issues. Their purpose is to record what actions
have been assigned to whom, along with the achievements and the deadlines.
Meetings are essential to move things forward in organizations. But they're also
infamous for their inefficiency: according to Doodle 2019 state of meeting report, the
cost of poorly handled meetings in 2019 will reach $399 billion in the U.S solely.
Learning Content
A. Unnumbered Sections
Title identifying the meeting
Formal opening of the meeting (The chairperson calls the meeting to order)
B. Numbered Sections
1. Obligatory items for ordinary meetings
1.1. Apologies for absence
1.2. Minutes of the previous meeting
1.3. Matters arising
2. Items for discussion at this meeting (Discussion of the agenda)
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Name of the company − to the top-left of the page.
Date − to the top-right of the page.
Topic − after two return keys; Center-aligned.
Attendees − Name and designation (2 columns of a table).
Absentees − name, roles, reasons for absenteeism. (3 columns)
Agenda at hand − topic to be discussed.
Issues raised − along with the names of the speakers.
Suggestions − made along with the names of the speakers.
Decision − the outcome of the meeting.
Task List − task allotted and the respective allottee.
Future Meetings − the date and topic of the next meeting
WELLNESS HOSPITAL
March 8, 200__
Attendance:
Dr. Danica G. Bonao called the meeting to order at 3:00 p.m. with a player led
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1. Preliminaries of the Meeting
1.1. Apologies for absence
1.2. Minutes of the previous meeting. [The minutes of the previous meeting
are read by the secretary or the recording officer.]
1.3. Dr. Dimalanta asked whether the medicines needed for the Medical
Mission have been purchased. Dr. Cayabyab confirmed that it had been bought.
2.2
2.3
The secretary informed the members of the date and time of the next meeting.
It will be held on the last Friday of next month, same time and same venue.
MYRNA C. FERRER
Secretary
If an item appears on the agenda, it must also appear in the minutes even if
nothing came up on it during the meeting. For example, if all members were present, that
is, no one was absent, this must be noted under the heading “Apologies for Absence” as
follows:
2. Matters arising
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3. Any other business
If amendments were made to the minutes of the previous meeting, these should
be noted in the minimum.
Example:
Mr. Reyes pointed out that his name was not spelled correctly. The secretary made
the corrections.
Ms. Bautista requested that it be recorded in the minutes that she was opposed to
the proposal to hire an additional technician. The chairperson asked the secretary to
insert, “Ms. Bautista objected to the proposal that the management should hire an
additional technician.” The minutes were accepted with the above amendments.
The amount of detail in the minutes varies. As decided by the group, it may either be:
1. Condensed. Only the wording of the motion, the proposer and seconder, the number
of votes and the decision appear.
1. The language of minutes is formal in style. The secretary does not refer to himself
as I but as the Secretary of Mr. X/Miss Y. When names are used, the surname
preceded by Mr/Miss/Mrs and other honorific as Dr/Sir/Madam are used.
2. The past tense of the verb is used to relate what happened at the meeting.
Example: “As there were no amendments, the chairperson confirmed the minutes.”
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6. Expressions of time and nearness must also be changed, as shown in the table below.
Examples:
7. The pronouns and possessive adjectives must be in the third person, not the first or
second person. Sometimes, the person we/us in direct speech is replaced by “the
committee” or “the meeting” when it refers to the members as a group.
Examples:
8. When writing minutes, avoid using the same reporting verb. Instead of said, the
following verbs may be used as:
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Learning Outcomes
b. Write and present academic papers using appropriate tone, style and conventions.
LET’S WARM UP
LET’S BEGIN…
ACADEMIC WRITING
This is a writing style that scholars and researchers use to define the intellectual
boundaries of their respective disciplines or their areas of expertise (Hartley, 2008).
Accordingly its general purpose is to aid the understanding of its readers. More
particularly, it has three purposes (Whitaker, 2009):
1. To persuade. You want to convince your reader to agree with your perspective so
you use reason and evidence to influence their stance about an issue or topic.
2. To analyse. You aim to explain and evaluate possible points about an issue or topic
based on criteria. Academic papers having this purpose usually investigate, examine,
evaluate, assess, establish relationships and synthesize.
3. To inform. You want to explain and give readers new points about an issue or topic.
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Features of Academic Writing (Gillett, 2018)
Here are the defining characteristics of academic writing that makes it different
from the other types of writing you might have done in the past:
1. Complexity
The complexity of academic papers lies in the grammar not in the vocabulary.
Compare the following examples:
2. Formality
Academic writing is formal because colloquial words and expressions (stuff,
sort of) as well as contractions (can’t, doesn’t) are avoided. Knowing the level of
formality needed in your paper is crucial that is why you should also know who your
readers are and your purpose for writing. The following table shows the three levels of
formality:
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UP, BTW, SOP (acronyms that may not be University of the Philippines, Ateneo de
universally known) Manila Iniversity, De La Salle University
(spelled out the first time they are used,
but later may be substituted with
acronyms)
hit the sack, loo, and comfort room Sleep, toilet or bathroom, and toilet or
(expressions from American English, British bathroom (more widely understood
English, and Philippine English) usages)
Lol, afk, nrn, #feels (informal Internet or text Laugh out loud, away from keyboard, no
messaging language) reply necessary, a wave of emotions
(spelled out or explained)
1. Precision
In academic writing, you have to make use of particular information, dates and figures.
For an instance, instead of saying “there are a lot of participants” say “there are 100
participants” instead.
2. Objectivity
Academic writing is not personal. This is because the emphasis should be on the
information and not on the writer. To ensure objectivity, strong support such as facts,
examples and expert opinions can be used.
3. Explicitness
The text of an academic paper is explicit in establishing the relationships in its contents.
It is not just all facts and summaries. Explicitness can be achieved by using transitional
devices.
4. Accuracy
Since academic writing is written by scholars for other scholars, the information therein
should be truthful and exact. Accuracy is seen not only in the information or data given
but also in the use of words. For an instance, while they may have similarities, the terms
“gathering”, “conference” and “meeting” refer to different things.
5. Organization
Academic writing is well-organized because the content flows easily from one part to
another. There is a standard organizational pattern for each kind but basically there is
an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
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6. Planning
Academic writing is well-planned. The writer has a specific purpose in writing which has
been established after research and evaluation. For this, many research sources should
be used to support ideas that are integrated in the paper.
ESSAY
BOOK
JOURNAL
REVIEW
RESEARCH
SYNTHESIS
PAPER
REACTION LITERATURE
PAPER REVIEW
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MOST COMMON EXAMPLES OF ACADEMIC WRITING
•where you can be more creative with your space and structure
•it is where descriptive langauge must used to differentiate
Body
between simply retelling of key events ans a rich narrative that
exhibits true personal reflection.
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STEPS IN WRITING
1. Prewriting – in this stage, you plan what you are going to write. You choose your
topic, identify your audience and purpose, brainstorm ideas, and organize your
information.
2. Drafting – in this stage, you start with a working thesis and then write your ideas in
sentences and paragraphs. You follow your prewriting plan to create a first draft of your
essay.
3. Revising – This stage involves making changes that will improve your writing. You
focus on large-scale elements of the essay, such as, overall organization or logical flow
of support, effective thesis statement, interesting introduction and concluding
paragraphs, well-developed body paragraphs with clear topic sentences, appropriate
tone and style for intended audience and purpose, etc.
4. Editing and Proofreading – this is the stage of your essay where you polish your
essay. You focus on smaller-scale yet important essay elements, such as, clarity in
sentence structure, appropriate word choice, correct spelling and grammar, and
accurate document format.
5. Publishing – in this final stage, you choose a way to present your work to an audience
(often this is indicated by your instructor).
As already stated, these steps do NOT need to be completed in this exact order;
frequently, in the writing process, you go back and forth between the different stages. A
true visual representation of this process may be more circular than linear. It may look
something like this example:
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TIPS IN WRITING
Author: (Anonymous)
Writing had always been one of my strengths, but it was challenging to take that
initial step past the high school, five-paragraph essay form that constricted my ideas for so
long. Moving past this form, however, has greatly opened my mind. My thoughts are now
able to be more complex because I have learned how to sustain a logical argument in an
organized manner. My writing has become increasingly more concise and I no longer have
room for added "fluff" or "padding." Another improvement is my ability to point out multiple
complexities within a text, instead of sticking to one-sided arguments in my papers.
Furthermore, learning how to find peer reviewed journal articles and order books through
interlibrary loan has significantly widened the scope of my research, which has led to more
scholarly papers with credible references. My writing is so much more interesting than it
used to be.
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1. INFORMATIVE ESSAY: It is written to provide information on topics that are not known to
a vast majority of readers. You are expected to do some research since you need to give
facts and evidence on your chosen topic. Your end goal is to make sure your reader will
understand your topic better. Your readers will expect up-to-date information, as well as
explanations of complex terms.
It provides
concrete and
purposeful
information.
define unique
terminologies, It defines
or compare and complex terms
contrast certain and ideas.
subjects.
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"How to Travel Solo Successfully"
James Baldwin said it best. "I met a lot of people in Europe. I even encountered myself"
(Baldwin, 2014). Solo travel will not only reveal colorful new heights, it will also introduce you to
yourself - your resiliency, your sense of adventure, your independence. Learning how to travel
solo is as intrinsic as tying your shoes, and it is something that can be learned today.
The first, most obvious, way to travel solo successfully is to research your area. The
number one indicator of a tourist is someone stopped in the middle of the sidewalk scanning the
GPS on their phone. According to World Travel News Report, four in fifteen tourists will be
pickpocketed if they stand still on a busy street (Parker, 2019). Arrive well-informed on the area.
Understand the public transportation system to the point where you can blend in as a local.
Also in line with safety, you may want to splurge on accommodations. You can stay alone
in a hostel, but read the reviews carefully. Make sure it is in a safe area and security is a priority
for them. You might even want to consider a private room, some of which include a private bath.
In terms of fun, pack for your lack of companionship. Bring a blank journal to record your
adventures. Pack a paperback to enjoy while you wait out a rainstorm in a coffee shop. World
traveler Samantha Byrnes says, "I never travel with friends. When I'm exploring a new continent,
my journal is my only sidekick" (Byrnes, 2018).
This allows her to absorb her new surroundings, make new acquaintances, and focus on
the act of encountering herself. Byrnes continues, "We lost sight of ourselves in the day-to-day.
We focus on work, family, to-do lists, chores. Solo travel allows us to return to ourselves so that,
when we resume our day-to-day activities, we can give our all" (Byrnes, 2018).
Learning how to travel solo successfully is an achievable feat. You can stay safe if you
remain knowledgeable on the area and choose your accommodations wisely. Beyond that, you
can experience true transformation through the simple act of carrying a tattered old journal.
What do you say? Will you explore solo travel? Choose wisely, for it just might change your life
forever.
2. RESEARCH REPORT
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A research paper uses outside information to support a thesis or make an
argument. Research papers are written in all disciplines and may be evaluative,
analytical, or critical in nature. Common research sources include data, primary sources
(e.g., historical records), and secondary sources (e.g., peer-reviewed scholarly articles).
Writing a research paper involves synthesizing this external information with your own
ideas.
TITLE
Name of author(s)
ABSTRACT
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
DEDICATION
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Chapter I. Introduction
A. Background
B. Statement of topic area
Chapter II. Literature Review
A. Summary and synthesis of the major schools of thought s on the topic and a review of the relevant
current main findings reported on the chosen topic.
B. Conceptual framework (links the research variables which has been specified based on the findings in
the literature so that the research questions and hypothesis could be explicitly stated in the next
subsection
C. Specific research question(s) and hypothesis to be tested.
Chapter III. Method
A. Participants
1. Who? How many?
2. Characteristics (male/female, proficiency level, native language, etc.)
3. Sampling Technique
B. Materials
1. What equipment? What Setting?
2. What data collecting instruments?
C. Procedures
1. How is the treatment to be administered?
2. How/when is the testing to be conducted?
3. What analysis techniques?
Chapter IV. Results
Charts, tables, and/or figures accompanied by verbal descriptions
Chapter V. Discussion/Conclusion (often two separate sections)
Common features:
• Summary of conclusions
• Relation to other results
• Aberrant results
• Implications
• Grand summary (including summary, limitations and suggestions for future research)
APPENDICES
THE RESEARCH PAPER
BIBLIOGRAPHY
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The research paper is the result of an exhaustive process that involves critical
thinking, source evaluation, organization and composition (Baker, Brizee and
Velazquez, 2018). It aims to further the field it was written for and provides scholars
with the means for increasing their knowledge.
While the topic can instantly be classified as controversial, you might have
mistakenly concluded that it is also debatable. It is not.
If you examine the statement more carefully, you will notice that no claim is made.
The statement simply articulated how various official sources have studied the effect of
marijuana and found it to be effective against some diseases. In other words, there is no
stance yet. If you want to use the same topic in your research paper, you should state it
this way:
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In this statement, the stance of the writer is already present. The writer is
challenging the established norm of marijuana being illegal. Now, the thesis statement
is both controversial and debatable.
From there, the writer may develop the research paper by citing primary and secondary
sources to support her thesis and thus persuade his readers that the interpretation he
presented is possible.
In this type of research paper, a question is usually addressed. And while the
question may also be debatable or controversial, the writer does not take a stance since
that is not the intention of the paper in the first place.
The statement above might be controversial and debatable in the sense that fairy
tales are not naturally examined or interpreted using the Marxist perspective; but take
note that there is no stance presented hence the writer does not intend to challenge
the traditional readings or interpretations on the fairy tale. Instead, the writer simply
aims to provide a new perspective or reading of the literary piece.
A. Title Page
As the first page of your paper, this contains the following:
✓ Title
✓ Author’s name
✓ Institutional affiliation
Note: Your professor may also add additional information in the title page such as
semester and school year among others.
B. Main Text
The main text of a research paper is composed of the following parts:
✓ Abstract
(Should not exceed 120 to 150 words)
The abstract should specify the purpose of the study, the participants (if there are)
and the results.
Note: Below the abstract are the keywords of the study which are to be separated by
commas.
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✓ Introduction
This part should describe the rationale of the study. Preferably, the discussion
must run from general to specific and end with a purpose or a hypothesis.
C. References
It is also termed as Bibliography or Works Cited in some instances. The sources
should be arranged in alphabetical order with hanging indention.
A. The Introduction
The introduction’s purpose is to show the reader the issues that enabled the
researcher to develop the inquiry in the first place and how he proposes to address them.
The introduction of a research paper does not have to be very long. In fact, a
shorter introduction is better.
B. The Body
The body of the research paper contains (a) the development of the argument
and (b) needed information to sustain the conclusion. It is also composed of a number
of sections which are indicated by headings.
The headings act as signposts on how the argument is being developed. For a
paper of 5,000 words, it is advisable that only two levels of heading are used. For a
paper of about 15,000 words, three levels of heading can be used.
To develop the body, you may use relevant illustrations and authoritative
quotations. When you use these elements, make sure that you also weave in your
argument or points in between. Remember, illustrations and quotations are useful in
validating your perspective but they should not be the sole content of your paper.
C. The Conclusion
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The last part of your paper, the conclusion, draws together everything that you
have argued and stated about the topic. Its focus should be on addressing the question
you asked at the beginning of the paper.
Phrase your conclusion in such a way that the inquiry will be finalized. There
should be no new arguments in this part of your paper.
Critiquing your first draft is a must. Look it over and reflect on the following
questions:
✓ Is the message clear?
✓ Are the points well-developed and exemplified?
✓ Is there a clear thread of argument?
✓ Are there gaps in the reasoning?
✓ Are there too many or too few quotations?
✓ Are the citations correctly stated?
✓ Was the research question/issue properly or clearly addressed?
✓ Do you think this is a good piece of writing?
It is at this stage that you will also receive the critique and advice of your
professor. Many students are apprehensive of this stage, but this should not be the case.
Instead, students should use this phase wisely since the supervisor’s criticism will enable
you to sharpen your ability to assess your own strengths and weaknesses in writing.
Objectives
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By the end of the lesson, you should be able to:
b. apply the different acceptable ways of citing and referencing in writing academic
paper.
Let’s Warm Up
1. Why do you think it is important to cite your sources in writing academic papers?
2. What would be the problem if you did not cite your sources in your academic paper?
LET’S BEGIN…..
✓ AVOIDING PLAGIARISM
Do not copy–paste the text verbatim from the reference paper. Instead, restate the
idea in your own words.
Understand the idea(s) of the reference source well in order to paraphrase correctly.
2. Quote
Use quotes to indicate that the text has been taken from another paper. The quotes
should be exactly the way they appear in the paper you take them from.
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3. Identify what does and does not need to be cited
Any words or ideas that are not your own but taken from another paper need to be
cited.
Cite Your Own Material—If you are using content from your previous paper, you
must cite yourself. Using material you have published before without citation is called
self-plagiarism.
The scientific evidence you gathered after performing your tests should not be
cited.
Maintain records of the sources you refer to. Use citation software like EndNote or
Reference Manager to manage the citations used for the paper
You can use various plagiarism detection tools such as iThenticate or eTBLAST
to see how much of your paper is plagiarised.
✓ CITATION
Primary: publicly available data (historical documents, interview data), raw data from
experiments and demographic records
Secondary: data that were also based on primary data and have been produced for
public consumption in journal articles or chapters in edited books.
When you include sources in your academic paper, they are known as literature. When
you use literature in your paper, it is known as citing or in-text referencing.
There are many types of citations styles used in academic writing and they depend on
the type of paper you are doing. Generally, students do not choose, they simply comply
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with the referencing style guidelines provided by the school or department they belong
to. The following are the citation style types commonly used in academic writing:
APA (American Psychological Association): this is used within the social sciences and sometimes
in other related fields. It is an author-date format by which in-text references are given within
parentheses.
In-text referencing:
Ex. Diaz (2010) suggested that…
Recommendations suggested that (Diaz, 2010)
Reference list:
1. Book: Author’s last name, Initials. (Year Published). Title of book. Place of
publication. Publisher.
Ex. Walklate, S. (2017). Criminology: The basics (2nd ed.). London, United Kingdom:
Taylor & Francis Ltd.
2. Journal article: Last name, Initials. (Year Published). Title of article. Title of Journal,
Volume number. Page numbers.
Ex. Sorensen, J., Snell, C., & Rodriguez, J. J. (2006). An Assessment of Criminal Justice
and Criminology Journal Prestige∗. Journal of Criminal Justice Education, 17(2), 297-
322.
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3. Webpage: Author’s last name, Initials. (Year Published). Title of webpage. Retrieved
from [URL here].
Notes: If there is no author, begin with the title and then the publication date
If there is no publication date, write n.d. (no date) within the parentheses instead
MLA (Modern Language Association): this is used within the fields of literature and
language. In-text referencing is also done within parentheses at the end of the sentence.
In-text Referencing: In MLA, the last name of the author and the page number are cited.
Ex. Diaz suggested that…(11)
Recommendations suggested that…(Diaz 11)
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Reference list:
1. Book: Author’s last name, First Name. Book Title. Place of publication. Publisher,
Publication year.
Ex. Walklate, Sandra. Criminology: The Basics. 2nd ed. London, United Kingdom:
Taylor & Francis Ltd, 2017.
2. Journal Article: Author’s last name, First name. “Title of Article.” Journal Title.
Volume. Issue Publication Year. Inclusive page numbers.
Ex. Sorensen, Jon, et al. "An Assessment of Criminal Justice and Criminology Journal
Prestige∗." Journal of Criminal Justice Education, vol. 17, no. 2, 2006. pp. 297-322.
3. Webpage: Author’s last name, First name. “Title of Work.” Title of overall website.
Version. Publisher. Publication Year. Date of access.
Ex. Muirehead, Roger. "Components of the Criminal Justice System." Goodwin College.
Wordpress, 2016, [Link]/enews/components-criminal-justice/. Accessed 11
Nov. 2015.
You cannot simply copy literature when you cite them in your paper. You have
to state the author’s idea in your own words. While this may be difficult at first, you can
improve with practice. You can do this effectively by summarizing and paraphrasing.
a. Summarizing
To summarize is to select the key or important features of a text and then
consolidate these into a shorter version of the original text. Summarizing is done by
simplifying ideas and by using differently structured sentences (Bowker, 2007).
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reading. Students’ poor reading
skills are credited to their lack of
interest in reading itself.
As you can see, there are words that were extracted from the original text and
used again in the summarized version. These are the keywords and preserving them in
the summarized version of the text is necessary to ensure that the original idea is still
retained.
b. Paraphrasing
When you paraphrase a text, you restate information differently. The difference
of summarizing from paraphrasing is that paraphrasing does not necessarily need to
shorten or condense the text. The aim of paraphrasing is to rewrite by using different
words and phrases (Bowker, 2007).
As you might have noticed, the paraphrased version is not necessarily shorter than
the original text. Furthermore, the order of ideas did not change.
Your summarizing and paraphrasing skills can be improved if you take the time to
develop an extensive vocabulary of words you can use. You may start with the following
terms (Bowker, 2007):
Articulate, comment, mention, maintain, note, point out, say, state, suggest,
indicate, refer
Hypothesize, predict, theorize, conceptualize, demonstrate, show, convey,
portray, support
Substantiate, corroborate, verify, confirm
Investigate, research, experiment, conduct, administer, observe
Acknowledge, assert, claim
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Argue, challenge, compare, contradict, contrast, counteract, debate, defend,
refute, hold
Comprise, consist, constitute, embody, characterize, define, identify,
recognize, diagnose
Create, construct, develop, generate, produce, evolve, manufacture
Synthesize, coordinate, cooperate, correspond, collaborate, contribute, share
Reveal, conceal
Analyze, examine, evaluate, scrutinize, criticize
Report, record, collect, collate, categorize, document
Differentiate, deviate, distinguish, divide, separate
Access, utilize, deploy, adopt, practice
Strengthen, increase, expand, weaken, reduce, decrease, contract, condense
Convince, compel, justify, explain, clarify, reason, account
Signify, highlight, specify, specialize, symbolize
Accumulate, calculate, maximize, minimize, formulate
Relate, connect, link, associate, correlate
Exclude, include, situate, locate, place
Condemn, deny, decline, negate
Dominate, segregate, subordinate
Affect, influence, transform
Conclude, summarize
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You can also practice effectively summarizing and paraphrasing by changing the
structure and form of the sentences. For that, you may use the following strategies
(Bowker, 2007):
b. Giving examples
For an instance…
Namely…
For example…
such as…
This can be illustrated by…
c. Clarifying
In other words…
Basically…
Namely…
d. Parallel ideas
Concurrently…
At the same time…
Simultaneously…
Equally…
e. Common points
Traditionally…
Typically…
Commonly…
Often…
Conventionally…
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f. Acknowledging something but bringing up a different perspective
Although…
Even though…
Despite…
Notwithstanding…
There are times when you do not have to summarize and paraphrase other
authors’ ideas when you use them in your paper; and you may use direct quotations
instead. When you do this, you have to enclose the direct quotations with quotation
marks (“ ”).
Direct quotations must be used minimally. You use direct quotations only when:
Direct quotations should never stand alone as much as possible. They should always
be placed in the text as support to other points made or as support for other statements.
Ex. Communicative competency is regarded as a crucial ability for teachers; that is why
they should be trained for it as early as possible. According to Natividad (2018),
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“Prospective teachers need to master communicative competence to ensure effective
instruction in their classrooms later on.”
As you can see in the given text, the direct quotation functioned as a support
for the claim given in the first sentence.
Objective
In the tertiary level of education, students are expected to present their academic
works in different settings such as in the classroom, in conferences and other relevant
events. Generally, you may find these activities daunting because you have to
summarize a long report into a few minutes of presentation only. With careful preparation
however, the activity can be made easier. Furthermore, presenting your paper to the
public enables you to receive constructive feedback for improving your work.
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According to McNair Scholars (2011), an oral presentation of an academic paper
should accomplish the following:
First of all, you have to keep in mind that to understand your work, your audience
will listen more to you rather than read what you show in your visual aids. That is why it
is important that you talk in such a way that your audience can easily follow you.
The Duke Writing Studio (2018) specified the following things that you should
remember to include in your talk:
2. Incorporating visuals
Visual components are meant to promote understanding of what you are saying
hence they should be presented as an aid and not a distraction to your discussion. Here
are some tips for you to consider in creating your visuals:
✓ Make sure that the background you use is simple and visually interesting. Also, avoid
backgrounds that make the text difficult to read.
✓ Text colors should contrast the background and keep them simple as well.
✓ Use fonts that are easy to read such as Times New Roman, Calibri or Arial. Use only
one font style all throughout your presentation. To ensure the readability of your text
observe these:
Titles: 44-point
Body: 22-point
✓ Avoid text heaviness. It is highly suggested that you create slides for each main point
of your discussion.
✓ Organize quantitative data in graphs or tables.
The time allotment for your presentation is something that you have to consider.
After all, you need to address your topic directly and clearly in a matter of few minutes,
usually 10 to 20 minutes.
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What students fear most in oral presentations is the prospect of questions about
their research. Nonetheless, if you understand your topic and what you did in your paper,
this is not really a problem. Moreover, you can always prepare and practice responses
to possible questions ahead of time.
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