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Problem-solution essay
Okay, viết mới nhớ được, 2 câu hỏi , 2 từ khóa
Emotion arise from, nguyên nhân là cái gây ra vấn đề, ko cẩn thận trong việc tiếp cận đề bài
1. What are the problems to this and how can it be solved?
2. What problems are caused by this? What solution would you reconmend?
3. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?
4. What problem does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?
Paraphase: diễn đạt
Sự đa dạng về từ vựng, chỗ dùng từ này chỗ dùng từ kia, khoe mình có vốn từ
Mitigate: giảm=untangle: gỡ rối, thay vì xử lý triệt để
Initiative: sáng kiến B2
Problem(n)=challenge, obstacle, concern, issue, trouble, worry, difficult situation
Solution= measure, approach, strategy, method, initiate, action/ course(s) of action, resolution to sth
Solve= address, tackle, overcome, resolve, find an answer to, mitigate (reduce the severity)=untangle
Mở bài:
Nêu ra các Problem cụ thể, solution chung chung
Kết bài:
Problem chung chung
Solution cụ thể
Ai cái gì, như thế nào, sedantary: ít vận động
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INTRODUCTION
Hook
Connecting information
Thesis state: mention both aspects “problems” and “solution”
-mention key words/aspects of the “problems”(more specific)
-mention that it is vital to identify solutions to these problems (more general)
Obesity has become a pressing global issue, impacting individuals across a large groups and socio-
economic backgrounds. The rise in obesity rates among both children and adults is alarming , with
serious implications for public health and economic productivity. Addressing this issue requires a
thorough understanding of its root causes and the implementation of effective, sustainable
interventions
BODY
Body 1: Problems 2
-Problem 1 – think about the cause of problem 1
-problem 2 –think about the cause of problem 2
Body 2: Solution 2 corresponding to the problems
-solution to problem 1 – think about how to solve the cause-who do what and how?
-solution to problem 2- think about how to solve the cause 2-who do what and how?
CONCLUSION
-provide a general statement about the problems
-summarize the solutions (more specifiic)
-provide further thoughts
In conclusion, the growing problem of obesity poses serious risks to societies around the world.
However with right mix of education, policy changes, and community support. It is possible to reduce
obesity rates and improve the overall well-being of the population. A coordinated effort from both
individuals and goverments is the key to addressing this modern- day health crisis effictively.
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all over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both
children and adults. What are the problem caused by this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled
body 1: problems
problem 1: the rise in chronic health conditions such as diabetes, heart disease and high blood pressure
+ these illnesses not only reduce life expectancy but also place a heavy burden on national healthcare
systems
+ this issue stems largely from unhealthy eating habits
Problem 2 the decline in workplace productivity
+obese individuals may suffer from fatigue, joint pain, and frequent illness, leading to increased
absenteeism and reduced work performance
+ a key cause of this is the sedentary lifestyle associated with modern office jobs
Body 2: solutions
Solution 1: the government should implement public health campaigns that encourage a balance diet.
+ In vn, for example, the ministry of health has partnered with schools to educate students about the
nutrition.
Solution 2: companies should introduce wellness initiatives
+ Such as standing desks, regular fitness sessions
+ these changes not only support employees’ health but also improve their efficiency and engagement
at work