The line graph displays the amount of UK acid rain emissions, which are shown in
millions of tonnes, across four various sectors from 1990 to 2007. It can be clearly seen
that while electricity, gas and water supply, domestic and other industries experienced a
decline throughout the period, there was a mild fluctuation in transport and
communication industry.
The electricity, gas and water supply, and the other industries started at around 3.3 and
roughly 2.1 million tonnes of acid rain emissions respectively in 1990. The former
industries’ contribution decreased dramatically to approximately 1.3 million tonnes until
1997 while the latter ones remained the same between 1990 and 1993. However, there
was a small fall to slightly below 1.75 million tonnes in around 1996 in emissions from
the other industries, and then stayed at this level until 1997. After that, there was no
change until 1998 in the first group of industries, but the figures slightly fluctuated from
1998 to 2000, and then continued to drop throughout the remaining period, falling to the
lowest point of 0.5 million tonnes. As for the second group of industries, they also
continued to decline until the end of the period, bottoming at roughly 1.25 million tonnes.
The transport and communication, and the domestic sectors stood at around 0.7 and
approximately 0.6 million tonnes respectively in 1990. A small fluctuation was recorded
between about 0.7 and exactly 1 million tonnes in the transport and communication from
1990 and 2007, ending with the exact figure as 1990 in 2007. The Domestic sector
witnessed a slow decrease to slightly below 0.25 million tonnes until 2007, declining to
the lowest point of all four sectors.
Stop using mechanical references like "former," "latter," and "first group"
entirely; instead, explicitly name the sectors or use synonyms (e.g., "the
utility sector") to improve clarity and ensure your verbs always have a
clear subject.
The pie charts compare the percentages of carbohydrates, protein and fat in an
average diet,a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport. Overall, while
carbohydrates are the highest consumed nutrient in all three diets, fat accounts
for the smallest proportion, and protein remains the second most consumed
nutrient.
The average and the healthy diets both have 20% fat which is 5% higher than the
one in the sport’s diet. Half of the whole healthy diet consists of carbohydrates, and
protein accounts for 30%. In the average diet, both carbohydrates and protein are
forty percent each, and this diet has the most proportion of protein compared to
proteins of the other diets. Regarding the healthy diet for athletes, while their diet
has the highest percentage of carbohydrates which is 60%, protein is the lowest of
them all, accounting for 25% of the diet.
Golden Rule: Always perform a final "Subject-Verb Agreement" check
on your opening sentence, as an error in the very first line immediately
signals a lack of grammatical control to the examiner.
The line graph displays the percentage of households in terms of how
many cars they have, from zero to three or more, in Great Britain
between 1971 and 2007. It can be clearly seen that while no car and
two cars households experienced a substantial decrease and a
significant growth respectively, a slow increase was recorded in the one
with three or more cars. Conversely, households owning one car
fluctuated slightly throughout the period.
No car households stood at slightly below 50% in 1971 which were the
most common ones at that time, but the figures fell dramatically to
roughly 25% in 2007. In contrast, two cars households started at
approximately 8% in 1971, and then there was a considerable rise to
slightly above 25% in 2007.
Households with three or more cars began at around 1% which was
the lowest percentage among all the households. They grew steadily
between 1971 and 2007, reaching a high of about 7%, but they still
contributed to the smallest proportion of the households. Regarding
one car households, a moderate fluctuation was seen throughout the
period, starting at more or less 44% and ending at just under the
opening figure.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of people who used the
internet in three countries from 1999 to 2009. It can be clearly seen
that although the USA had the highest percentage of internet users at
the beginning of the period, Canada surpassed it at the end of the
period. Regarding Mexico, the figure was the lowest throughout the
time.
The percentage of internet users in the USA was the highest in
1999, with roughly 20% of the population using it. The figure
increased dramatically by approximately 60 percentage points to
around 80% in 2009. The population of Canada who used the
internet stood at about 10% in 1999, but then there was a huge
jump to nearly 100% in 2009.
In 1999, roughly 5% of Mexico’s population used the internet, and
it experienced a gradual growth to slightly above 45% in 2009.
However, despite the steady rise, Mexico had the lowest
percentage among the three countries.
The graph illustrates how many people moved into the UK, the
number of emigrants, and the net migration in the UK between
1999 and 2008. It can be clearly seen that while immigration
rates in the UK were the highest, the number of people who
migrated from the UK was the lowest, and the net number of
international migration fluctuated throughout the period.
The number of individuals who moved into the UK from foreign
countries was the highest, with roughly 460,000 immigrants living
there in 1999. The figure experienced a constant increase to
approximately 590,000 in 2004, but fell to around 570,000 in
2005 before reaching a peak of nearly 600,000 in 2006. Although
there was a slight drop by more or less 20,000 in 2007,
immigration rates rose gradually to slightly below 600,000 in
2008. Conversely, emigration stood at about 290,000 in 1999,
and an increasing trend was recorded to exactly 400,000 between
1999 and 2006. There was a moderate decrease to slightly below
350,000 in 2007 before reaching a high of roughly 420,000 in
2008.
The net migration started at around 170,000 in 1999, and saw a
mild fluctuation until 2003. After that, it jumped to approximately
250,000 in 2004, but decreased to the point, where it was in
1999, in 2008.
Golden Rule: Avoid "over-commaing" your sentences; only use
commas to separate distinct ideas or introductory phrases, never to
isolate essential defining clauses starting with "where" or "that."