PROCESS
1 CHIZIQLI - 2 AYLANA
INTRODUCTION AND OVERVIEW
- PARAPRASE THE QUESTION/
– WRITE THE NUMBER OF STAGES AS
WELL AS THE BEGINNING AND THE
ENDING (COMMENCING WITH … AND
CULMINATING WITH …)
BODY 1/2- START WITH THE FIRST STAGE
AND FINISH WITH THE LAST ONE.
The diagram details the process of making smoked fish.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
The process details the steps by which smoked fish is produced. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that smoking fish can be divided into 3 main stages beginning
with catching and transportation, followed by storage and processing, and finally further
storage and transportation to fish shops for retail.
The process commences when fish are caught in nets and then transported by boat to a
port. From this point, they are frozen and then later undergo a thawing process in fresh
water. The next stage is to slice open the fish and put them in a salt water solution that
also contains some amount of yellow coloring. Following this, the actual smoking takes place.
After smoking, the fish are packaged in boxes and frozen at zero degrees centigrade in larger
containers. They are finally grouped into cold storage bins and distributed by truck to shops to
sell to consumers.
Analysis
1. The process details the steps by which smoked fish is produced. 2. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that smoking fish can be divided into 3 main stages beginning with
catching and transportation, followed by storage and processing, and finally further storage and
transportation to fish shops for retail.
1. Paraphrase what the process shows.
2. Write a clear overview summarising the major groups.
1. The process commences when fish are caught in nets and then transported by
boat to a port. 2. From this point, they are frozen and then later undergo a thawing
process in fresh water. 3. The next stage is to slice open the fish and put them in a
salt water solution that also contains some amount of yellow coloring. 4. Following
this, the actual smoking takes place.
1. Begin writing about the details of the process.
2. This one is tricky to get up to the word count (no longer required on
IELTS) so try to make it a little wordy.
3. Include every step in the process.
4. Vary short and long sentences.
1. After smoking, the fish are packaged in boxes and frozen at zero degrees
centigrade in larger containers. 2. They are finally grouped into cold storage bins
and distributed by truck to shops to sell to consumers.
1. Write about the rest of the process – include everything!
2. Try to paraphrase some of the words from process as well.
The process details the steps by which smoked fish produced the diagram
shows the ways fish is made into smoked fish
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall
can be divided into 3 main stages can be grouped into 3 big groups
beginning with catching and transportation starting with finding and taking to
followed by storage and processing after that keeping and making
finally further storage lastly keeping again
transportation sending to a place
fish shops places where fish are sold
retail for sale in shops
process commences diagram starts
caught in nets fishermen catch them
transported by boat to a port sent by ships to the docks where ships are
From this point starting here
frozen turned to ice
then later undergo a thawing process in fresh water after that the ice melts in
water without salt
The next stage is to slice open the fish the fish are then cut open
put them in a salt water solution place in water with salt
contains some amount of yellow coloring has some yellow chemical in it
Following this after this
actual smoking takes place the real cooking happens
After next
packaged in boxes and frozen at zero degrees centigrade in larger
containers put in containers at 0C and then bigger ones
finally grouped into cold storage bins lastly put into boxes that are very cold
distributed by truck sent by vehicles
consumers people who buy things
The diagram details the process of making leather products.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram details the process by which leather products are made for retail. Looking from an
overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there are 3 main steps to this entirely man-made
process beginning with initial transportation of the raw material to the factory, followed by
preparation and processing of the material, and finally the production of consumer products.
Firstly, the leather skins from various animals are dried. Subsequent to this, they are taken to a
factory by truck where they are washed in water and lime. The skins are then soaked in more lime
for a period of time before being run through a machine with large rollers that flattens them out.
Next, the flattened skins are soaked in tannin, which is composed of water and vegetable matter.
They are then polished by another rolling device and taken to another factory by trucks. In this
factory, the final products are crafted and available to consumer shops.
Analysis
1. The diagram details the process by which leather products are made for retail. 2. Looking from an
overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there are 3 main steps to this entirely man-made process
beginning with initial transportation of the raw material to the factory, followed by preparation and
processing of the material, and finally the production of consumer products.
1. Paraphrase what the process shows.
2. Write a clear overview summarising the major groups.
1. Firstly, the leather skins from various animals are dried. 2. Subsequent to this, they are
taken to a factory by truck where they are washed in water and lime. 3. The skins are then
soaked in more lime for a period of time before being run through a machine with large
rollers that flattens them out.
1. Begin writing about the details of the process.
2. This one is tricky to get up to the word count (no longer required on
IELTS) so try to make it a little wordy.
3. Include every step in the process.
1. Next, the flattened skins are soaked in tannin, which is composed of water and vegetable
matter. 2. They are then polished by another rolling device and taken to another factory by
trucks. 3. In this factory, the final products are crafted and available to consumer shops.
1. Write about the rest of the process – include everything!
2. Try to paraphrase some of the words from process as well.
3. Add in the last step of the process.
diagram details process how
process diagram
leather products made from animal skins, usually from cows
retail for sale
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that overall
main steps biggest stages
entirely completely
man-made process done by humans
beginning with starting with
initial transportation first sending
raw material basic substance
factory place to make items
followed by next
preparation being made
processing making into
finally in the end
production making into something
consumer products objecets for sale
firstly to start
skins the hide of an animal
dried not wet
subsequent to this after this
taken sent to
truck big car
washed cleaned
lime cleaning substance
soaked left in water
a period of time some period
run through put through
machine device
large rollers big objects for flattening
flattens them out stretches them
next after this
tannin a chemical protein
composed of made of
vegetable matter comes from vegetables
polished made shiny
rolling device circular object for flattening or spreading
final end
crafted made
available can be bought
consumer shops stores
Aylana – Natural Process
INTRODUCTION AND OVERVIEW
- PARAPRASE THE QUESTION/
– WRITE THE NUMBER OF STAGES AS WELL AS THE BEGINNING AND
THE ENDING (COMMENCING WITH … AND CULMINATING WITH …)
BODY 1/2- START WITH THE FIRST STAGE AND FINISH WITH THE LAST
ONE.