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Pet Peeves About My Brother

The document is a young girl's list poem about what bugs her about her rotten redheaded older brother. Each line describes something her brother can do better than her, such as climb higher, eat more rhubarb, and pick more blackberries. The last line reveals that despite his flaws, she still loves him with all her heart.

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Pet Peeves About My Brother

The document is a young girl's list poem about what bugs her about her rotten redheaded older brother. Each line describes something her brother can do better than her, such as climb higher, eat more rhubarb, and pick more blackberries. The last line reveals that despite his flaws, she still loves him with all her heart.

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CassSilva89
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What Bugs Me about My Rotten Redheaded Older Brother

Thinking Map
Can climb the highest Can do everything better than me Can get the dirtiest Can pick more blackberries than me

Can eat more rhubarb

What bugs me about my Rotten Redheaded Older Brother

Orange hair, covered in freckles and looks like a weasel in glasses He is mean

Can burp louder


Can spit the farthest

RAFT
Role Audience Format Topic What Bugs Me about my rotten redheade d older brother

Tricia

Herself

List Poem

Title

Tells you whats bugging me.

Every line has the same structure: when ____

What Bugs MeList Poem


Shares pet peeves Must flow like a story Informative

Modeled Writing: What Bugs Me-List Poem


My Rotten Redheaded Older Brother When my rotten redheaded older brother is mean to me. When my rotten redheaded older brother tells me he does everything better than me. When my rotten redheaded older brother spits further than me. When my rotten redheaded older brother burps louder than me. When my rotten redheaded older brother can eat more rhubarb than me. When my rotten redheaded older brother picks more blueberries than me. What bugs me the most is that even though my redheaded older brother can be rotten I love him with all my heart!

Rubric
Must have a title
Must tell me whats bothering you Must share pet peeves Every line structure should be the

same Poem should be 9-10 sentences long

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